|Reviews for Breathe|
| moonfaerie326 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
This was perfect. I can really see this going through Tony's mind in those moments. It was so real and it was very powerful.
I applaud you and your ability to pack so much emotion into so few words. You did wonderfully.
| 11nivea342 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
perfect. perfect. 3
| Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
That gave me goose bumps.
Cool perspective on the scene though.
I always love your stories regardless of how short and sweet.
| Ziny-DiNozzo chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
when i first saw that scene i thought Tony was gonna ring her desk so she'd answer and be like "officer David" or what ever and he'd be all "Welcome back" but it'd be all cute.
| scousemuz1k chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Ah, lovely. They're back to the long, meaningful looks. Great drabble.
| zats chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Your story told how all of us felt when Ziva returned. We all took a breath. The road may be long, but it is a beginning. Great chapter!
| Dew on the Sunflower chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Aw...how sweet, I like it
| luvztorite chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I'll be hanging out for this one. Sounds like a great beginning. I can't wait to see the rest.
| USAFChief chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Learning to breathe again can be just that easy. You certainly have a way with words, and great ideas.
This is very good, my friend.
| zatl chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
eek. :) this was cute. and perfect. I loved it.
| christiangirliemiranda chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Great! I think it describes the moment perfectly!
| dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Tony should be really happy Ziva's back. I hope to see it too. Some appreciation.
Maybe a little. :/
| ILuvPelicans chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
very good-straight to the point. Very well done.