Reviews for Breathe
moonfaerie326 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
This was perfect. I can really see this going through Tony's mind in those moments. It was so real and it was very powerful.

I applaud you and your ability to pack so much emotion into so few words. You did wonderfully.

Great job!
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
perfect. perfect. 3
Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
That gave me goose bumps.

Cool perspective on the scene though.

I always love your stories regardless of how short and sweet.
Ziny-DiNozzo chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
when i first saw that scene i thought Tony was gonna ring her desk so she'd answer and be like "officer David" or what ever and he'd be all "Welcome back" but it'd be all cute.
scousemuz1k chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Ah, lovely. They're back to the long, meaningful looks. Great drabble.
zats chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Your story told how all of us felt when Ziva returned. We all took a breath. The road may be long, but it is a beginning. Great chapter!
Dew on the Sunflower chapter 1 . 10/4/2009 sweet, I like it
luvztorite chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I'll be hanging out for this one. Sounds like a great beginning. I can't wait to see the rest.

USAFChief chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Learning to breathe again can be just that easy. You certainly have a way with words, and great ideas.

This is very good, my friend.

Thank you.
zatl chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
eek. :) this was cute. and perfect. I loved it.
christiangirliemiranda chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Great! I think it describes the moment perfectly!
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Tony should be really happy Ziva's back. I hope to see it too. Some appreciation.

Maybe a little. :/
ILuvPelicans chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
very good-straight to the point. Very well done.
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