Reviews for Naruto: The Harbinger of Death
nickkenagy chapter 4 . 11/27/2015
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1 Fan chapter 4 . 7/10/2015
In the words of Tiny Tina.
You da man, youda youda man!

This story is fucking awesome and your actually my first straight make writer so kudos to you. Try bashing Guy and Lees relationship and give Shikamaru some thought lines? He's intelligent and I think he should be taken under Narutos wing as a smarter demon, not necessarily a pure strength type guy.

Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter
NoMoreGayJokes chapter 4 . 3/9/2015
plz why cant he be gay? ill sell u 30 prostitutes trade?
WATERDOG139 chapter 4 . 3/7/2015
Please update this it is awesome
ShadowImageComics chapter 4 . 2/8/2015
Okay, this was a good read. I would like to see chapter 5 one day.
Eden999 chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
good only saw very minor mistakes but i only saw them because i notice even the smallest things when im interested in someting
LadyEudave05 chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
Plz update soon
kr33 chapter 4 . 9/8/2014
when will the next chapter come out
seigetsu58 chapter 3 . 7/1/2014
This is a pretty cool story you got going here :)
NaruShika-Forever chapter 4 . 5/21/2014
Didn't expect Ryuu to break sakura arm
Guest chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
When is chapter 5 gonna come out? I really like this fanfic
Guest chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
Very nice i love the writing blood gore fucking all of ut us good keep it up
Jjluvu2001 chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
Update I want anko to get way stronger with him
demonlight6767 chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
I like it! Please update!
YuhirahTheGod chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
Your grammar is shitty. Get a fucking beta, NOW. Otherwise, you got a good story going. Longer chapters would be good, use a spellcheck program BEFORE you send in a chapter to your beta. Have the beta help edit the first four chapters before you write a new one.
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