Reviews for Only You Can Save Me
insomniacinsanity chapter 1 . 11/10/2022
Cute story!
leinchen chapter 8 . 6/30/2022
I really liked this story!
Thank you for writing and sharing it!
JNB29 chapter 8 . 6/25/2022
I really enjoyed this normal story.
Elisabeth123 chapter 8 . 3/11/2022
Thank you for such a wonderful story. You’re a brilliant author!
datahawk chapter 3 . 12/13/2021
Thank you for continuing this!
Elle Whitecap chapter 5 . 1/9/2021
This story would be awesome as a longfic
Roxy70 chapter 8 . 10/6/2020
Sweet story! Thank you!
Longing to Write chapter 8 . 10/4/2020
Beautiful ending.
Escapee2FF chapter 8 . 10/1/2020
Really nice story thankyou
ecullensgurl chapter 1 . 8/28/2020
Loved it! Could have kept on reading their story.
No longer here 2022 chapter 8 . 8/1/2020
This was such a cute little story! I absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing.
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/27/2020
Sweet and lovely. Thanks for writing and sharing.
saintfudge chapter 8 . 5/12/2020
Loved it ..thanks for sharing have fun
war123 chapter 8 . 3/3/2020
StrawberryFreesia chapter 1 . 2/14/2020
Beautiful story. It would be beautiful to have another chapter soon after there 10 year anniversary where bella discovers she's pregnant again and. It could be beautiful aa edward supports her in the pregnancy with their fears that it will be a lily repeat. Also would be so lovely if they had another girl. Bella's rich brown hair but edwards incredible green eyes. I read another review and loved the idea of bella suggesting to edward that they named her Sam in honour abf and love of edwards first wife and the woman who brought Ellie into the world. Also i noticed that Ellies's first name is allison. Does that mean her husbands name is jasper
On a silly note would also be fun if Jacob tries to hit on bella and tell her losing her was the biggest mistake and regret of his life as he thinks she's ultra hot. She could tell him losing him was one of the best things that had ever happened to her as it lead to her living a life that she was excited to live every day. Ooooh there could be a mini jake point of view of him noticing her leaning against a motorbike across the street in her Ellie chosen leather jacket and gawking and thinking how hot she is and then just as he's about to cross the street to try and begin to get her to notice him he sees edward come out of a shop with one ice cream and sees them teasing each other as he holds it out of her reach while she smacks his bum then he lowers it to her lips and runs the ice cream over them before he licks and kisses it back off and she grabs his butt and pulls him closer to her whilst he drops the ice cream and weaves his fingers into her hair as they passionately kiss before laying their foreheads against each other and gazing at each other before edward squats down and kisses her stomach and moves his hand to her still flat stomach beaming up at her at which she beams back down at him to before pulling him by his collar back up to her lips... Only interrupted because they hear a commotion across the street as a man comes out of the shop nearest to jake that just happens to be the last woman he cheated ons father and yells at him to stop polluting the pavement outside his shop with his presence as edward realises jake had been gawking at his wife's butt and witnessed their entire exchange... Edward whispers into his wife's ear that he just realised s their e moment was very unprivate and witnessed jealously by her ex who was currently being yelled at whilst he kept getting distracted and glancing back at bella's butt longingly bella laughs not believing him but to be on the safe side grabs edwards hands and places them on her butt before clasping her hands round his neck and gojng kn her tiptoes as ge bends his head to her ear as she whispers that he needs to cover protect and cover up the butt that belongs to him as she doesn't want any eyes on it but his. He chuckles before turning bella round so his back is now to jake and bella's but completely out of jakes view. Only as the father of the last girl jake cheated on get louder as he tries to get jakes attention back bella peeks over her husbands shoulder shocked to see just how serious her husband was.
There now if that doesn't put jake in his place I'm not sure what does
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