Reviews for Only You Can Save Me
my2galspal chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I'm so glad you ended with a glimpse into the future. If you hadn't I was going to beg you to continue this story after the contest. I love it, love it, love it! As much as I'd like to see how their relationship developed and how Ellie adjusted to having Bella in her life, this ending is enought to keep me satisfied. If however you decide to do something else with it I wouldn't argue with you. ;)

Thanks so much for sharing your writing and best of luck in the contest. Now, go get back to work on Late Night Encounters or the sequel for ABC. I can't wait to see what you have in story for us.
gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
wow.. thanks!

you're amazing..this is such a heartfelt story!
TwilightMomOf3 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I really loved this one-shot, it was sweet and I liked the relationship between Ellie and Bella, that was nice to read about. I really hope you win and I will definetly vote for you!
Lawn Girl chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
What a beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
the-glory-days chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
*wipes tears away*

This was absolutely heartbreaking and beautiful. I loved it so much. Every part of the story was tugging at a different emotion, and Edward honestly broke my heart. You did an amazing job. ~Jen
dlawrey chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Beautiful! Wish there was more!
adma845 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
loved it
breakawaygirl chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
This was really sweet! I have to say, I've never read Edward as a grease monkey, but you made him H.O.T!
Dazzled77 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I loved your story. I would love it even more if you would fill in the blanks of those two years to see how their relationship progressed.I would also love to see them after the baby is born. Please continue!
neeuqpmats chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
That was absolutely beautiful. Loved every single bit of it. The build up was slow, steady, and fantastic. Loved the characters you so lovingly brought to life. Loved it. Loved it. Would love it as a multi chaptered story as well. sigh.
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Are you freaking serious Dawn?

Oh my god, that was awesome!

Thankyou for adding another image for my "edward cullen sexual fantasies jar" with this one:

"disheveled hair, unshaven face, tight faded blue jeans and a white muscle shirt with grease stains scattered across it, showcasing his muscular arms and shoulders'

Wow, thats one mother of a fuckhot image!

I am in awe an slightly envious of the way you write, i have loved everything you have written.

The only thing i'm sad about is that this is a one-shot...

There is so much story there, that i got to the bottom hoping that you would keep writing this story! I'd love to know what ha[[ened in between that day and the wedding : )

BUT i know how many stories you are already writing, and i love them all.

Can't wait for more "late night encounters", the sequel to "anything but conventional" and i'm still praying that one day we will get to see more of "taken".

LOVED this story so much. Thankyou for sharing this one with us! 3
StarlightSuccubus chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Dawnie! Loved it! Totally, totally loved it!

It was worth the effort and stressing over it because the finished product is completely awesome. I have a smile on my face now because this Edward is simple delicious and OMFG so sweet!

Loved Elie and I would have love to see her reaction about Bella and Edward being together, but I guess the outtake? *pouts*

I completely love the ending and how they reached it. Seth was wrong and Bella and Edward are meant for each other... The jacket scene was... sexy and awesome, loved it! I wish I could know what Edward was thinking...

Also, yummy... Levi's... Hahahahaha...

More or Bikeward/Dilfward?



Charlie and Chri, win! *thumbs up*

Love you hard and this was totally worth the effort and stressing out... This was awesome and I wish I could have been there with you more that I was able to.


marcy86 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Wow That was beautiful Dawn. Im amazed how lovely this story was and when you read it you just cant help it to want more. Everything you write is amazing and it gets better and better with each story. I hope you know just how great and talented writer you are. Please dont ever stop writing! Pretty please?

Are you planning to continue the story once the contest is over? Because at least another one-shot to the story will be awesome. If not, no worries the story is fantastic with or without an insight to their marriage.

Love you girl,

Marcy xoxo
readerkitty chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I normally avoid oneshots like the plague. If I did not have you on alert I would never have read this little gem. So glad I did though. What a great read. Thankyou.
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