|Reviews for Girl with a Red Umbrella|
| lovelyeshelle chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
So far ... I'm liking this story a lot! It's different than anything I've read in ffn. I like that Edward is a painter also ... Cant wait to read more!
| CullenObsession114 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
loved the update!
| Raewright chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Oh Honey, we are very glad he isn't Jacob!
Good chapter! Dying for an Edward/Bella confrontation.
| NanMcCullen chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Oh... the tension is building! Wow! And Alice does seem a little flighty, and promiscuous... especially for that day in age. In any case, I love, love, love it and can't wait for more!
| manda2784 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Oh, they've seen each other now! I can't wait to see what will happen next. By the way, I'm loving the writing style in this story.
| Melee03 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Beautifully written, really enjoying this story.
| WootWoot83 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
This story has completely captured me. I love the historical details woven into the suspenseful plot... It's definitely keeping me on my toes! I also especially love the visual of an Audrey Hepburn Alice - That's perfect!
| Euphoria9 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Wow, I love this story.
I can't believe you put out another amazing chapter so quickly.
Edward danderous, hm. Only to her hormones
Until next time,
| bootsie chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Enjoying reading this! Thanks for writing!
| mommy2kh chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
I enjoyed this chapter and them first seeing each other and making eye contact. Can't wait to see what happens next!
| treasurecoast chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Great story and plot! Love the the description of Paris and the people. Very atmospheric and film noir. I can picture everything from the details. Can't wait to read more!
| Banky chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Aww, I'm loving this story so far - v film noir, and atmospheric! Keen to read more, as and when.
| hesterjane chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
AHH, they saw each other. I bet he was gaping because she's devastatingly pretty. Hmm, yep. He probably thought he would never see her again..and now he did. What a coincidence. I was sorta hoping she would bump into Emmett (again?). I think that was him the first time. Possibly. Lol. So I can't wait to see where this is going. Is there an update schedule or something?
| hesterjane chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
well this seems interesting. he saw bella, didn't he? so adorable.
i am intrigued as to how all of them become intermingled throughout the story. can't wait for more :D
| Dawnriki chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
Love it so far! I am very interested to hear more about Rosalie and to read how Alice and Bella will meet up with the boys.