|Reviews for Girl with a Red Umbrella|
| debslmac chapter 30 . 5/13/2014
loved this story
| JustARead chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
A wanker lol
| JustARead chapter 5 . 4/16/2014
Haha real charmer E
| JustARead chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
| JustARead chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
E working, hmm
| JustARead chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Lol poor b
| Lilith Leazman chapter 30 . 4/14/2014
Such a lovely story. I read this through in about a week and couldn't stop thinking about it. Truly lovely. I will definitely be adding it to my Favorites. _
| jus2read chapter 30 . 4/6/2014
Wonderful story and well-written :) loved it :D
| Atwiggs chapter 30 . 3/31/2014
I am so happy that you guys got together to write this wonderful story. I haven't read any other stories from justaskalice yet but I am going there next. Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment. And if either of you will be publishing a novel, I will certainly buy it.
| Atwiggs chapter 28 . 3/31/2014
Awww they are so wonderful together.
| Atwiggs chapter 27 . 3/31/2014
I just wish somebody would have thanked Edward for setting up the drug deal that got James arrested, that's what got the ball rolling that lead to Royce's arrest. Did I miss that. It just seems like Edward is being neglected a tiny bit and I feel a little sad for him. He is so unselfish that he would never complain. Maybe it's just me, I'm a little down today.
| Atwiggs chapter 24 . 3/31/2014
I just love your version of love/sex scenes! This one, that just happened, well some writers are kinda vulgar about these things. But when you write it, it's so sexy but also sweet. I just love your sex scenes, no vulgar body-part names and filled with love and consideration. It's an art, and you have perfected it!
| Atwiggs chapter 23 . 3/31/2014
Oh God, I am sure something bad is going to happen, especially since those two men were at the cafe'...
| Atwiggs chapter 22 . 3/31/2014
When Edward thanked his father for his help and his father answered in kind...I had a lump in my throat. So glad they are talking.
| Atwiggs chapter 20 . 3/31/2014
Finally, Bella told Edward that she loved him. I felt so sorry for him having to wait so Long. I understand why she waited, but damn! I just Love Esme, she is so good for Rose.