Reviews for Girl with a Red Umbrella
JustARead chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Lol poor b
Lilith Leazman chapter 30 . 4/14/2014
Such a lovely story. I read this through in about a week and couldn't stop thinking about it. Truly lovely. I will definitely be adding it to my Favorites. _
jus2read chapter 30 . 4/6/2014
Wonderful story and well-written :) loved it :D
xxx
Atwiggs chapter 30 . 3/31/2014
I am so happy that you guys got together to write this wonderful story. I haven't read any other stories from justaskalice yet but I am going there next. Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment. And if either of you will be publishing a novel, I will certainly buy it.

God Bless!
Atwiggs chapter 28 . 3/31/2014
Awww they are so wonderful together.
Atwiggs chapter 27 . 3/31/2014
I just wish somebody would have thanked Edward for setting up the drug deal that got James arrested, that's what got the ball rolling that lead to Royce's arrest. Did I miss that. It just seems like Edward is being neglected a tiny bit and I feel a little sad for him. He is so unselfish that he would never complain. Maybe it's just me, I'm a little down today.
Atwiggs chapter 24 . 3/31/2014
I just love your version of love/sex scenes! This one, that just happened, well some writers are kinda vulgar about these things. But when you write it, it's so sexy but also sweet. I just love your sex scenes, no vulgar body-part names and filled with love and consideration. It's an art, and you have perfected it!
Atwiggs chapter 23 . 3/31/2014
Oh God, I am sure something bad is going to happen, especially since those two men were at the cafe'...
Atwiggs chapter 22 . 3/31/2014
When Edward thanked his father for his help and his father answered in kind...I had a lump in my throat. So glad they are talking.
Atwiggs chapter 20 . 3/31/2014
Finally, Bella told Edward that she loved him. I felt so sorry for him having to wait so Long. I understand why she waited, but damn! I just Love Esme, she is so good for Rose.
Atwiggs chapter 19 . 3/31/2014
This just keeps getting better and better! Thank God Rose reached out to Bella! And thank God she had Edward, Jasper, Alice and especially Emmett there for her also. Too bad about her baby...

Thank God Edward finally got to make love to his Bella. I love when that happens! :D
Atwiggs chapter 17 . 3/31/2014
Poor Jasper! Poor Alice, she doesn't know how to help him. We know, of course, that she will find away. Now, how can Bella help Edward? I am still sooo loving this wonderful story. You ladies rock!
Atwiggs chapter 14 . 3/31/2014
I guessed right, Kate was lost in a bombing, so awful for Edward. I can't imagine him going to the US now...he seems made for Paris. I know he will enjoy the scenery of Forks, but is it too tame for him? I know he'll try anything for Bella...
Atwiggs chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
So I wonder what is in Edwards past. Did his family get bombed out in the war? Was Kate his sister or friend? Time will tell. You Ladies did a phenomenal job on this story! And what happened to Jasper? POW? Burned?
Atwiggs chapter 8 . 3/30/2014
I am loving this story! I love how almost everybody is in Paris now. Ladies, you have done a fantastic job on this. Congrats!
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