|Reviews for Girl with a Red Umbrella|
| LesleyLunaCullen chapter 17 . 6/9/2014
I love this story but I don't know if I like Bella. She's so judgemental, she is closed off but is a know it all. So self involved, and now she wants to out Edward when she is incapable of saying the L word? Maybe she should worry about her own issues, like her emotional detachment. Oh, and fuck Rose. I don't care what the situation is, she should be confined to her situation.
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/6/2014
| LAB1 chapter 30 . 5/27/2014
Wow! What an incredibly romantic story! I love Edward and his thoughts. I laughed myself silly over the cat!
| debslmac chapter 30 . 5/13/2014
loved this story
| JustARead chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
A wanker lol
| JustARead chapter 5 . 4/16/2014
Haha real charmer E
| JustARead chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
| JustARead chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
E working, hmm
| JustARead chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Lol poor b
| Lilith Leazman chapter 30 . 4/14/2014
Such a lovely story. I read this through in about a week and couldn't stop thinking about it. Truly lovely. I will definitely be adding it to my Favorites. _
| jus2read chapter 30 . 4/6/2014
Wonderful story and well-written :) loved it :D
| Atwiggs chapter 30 . 3/31/2014
I am so happy that you guys got together to write this wonderful story. I haven't read any other stories from justaskalice yet but I am going there next. Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment. And if either of you will be publishing a novel, I will certainly buy it.
| Atwiggs chapter 28 . 3/31/2014
Awww they are so wonderful together.
| Atwiggs chapter 27 . 3/31/2014
I just wish somebody would have thanked Edward for setting up the drug deal that got James arrested, that's what got the ball rolling that lead to Royce's arrest. Did I miss that. It just seems like Edward is being neglected a tiny bit and I feel a little sad for him. He is so unselfish that he would never complain. Maybe it's just me, I'm a little down today.
| Atwiggs chapter 24 . 3/31/2014
I just love your version of love/sex scenes! This one, that just happened, well some writers are kinda vulgar about these things. But when you write it, it's so sexy but also sweet. I just love your sex scenes, no vulgar body-part names and filled with love and consideration. It's an art, and you have perfected it!