Reviews for If This Is Fate
CatMasters chapter 16 . 12/27/2009
your story is amazing and I love it. I do admit I was shocked that BE went from kissing to sex but what are you gonna do with horny teenagers. lol

I am so nervous about James and if he will do something and if so to who. I can't wait for more!
Jely-bean chapter 16 . 12/21/2009
This is the best story ever. i loved this chapter so much. cant wait for the next one please update soon :D
2grtkids chapter 16 . 12/18/2009
I know that I have been a bad friend and have not commented on the last few chapters...so,so sorry,please forgive me. This last chapter made me cry. It was amazing and I am continually impressed by your writing. Very sweet lemon...you did a great job. Heart you to pieces...Marcy
Knit Bit chapter 16 . 12/18/2009
Graf! I love it! I really really do! It is such a good read. He was really sweet. So, hm later? lol. I want to hear about the Christmas one shot! Thanks for the update, again...it was really good.
my4Queens chapter 16 . 12/17/2009
I am so happy that Bella and Edward have gotten together. It was such a spur of the moment, take advantage of being alone rush. I hope that it was everything she wanted and dreamed it would be. I also am encouraged by Edwards thoughtfulness in not wanting to take it to that level, and feels bad for going there when he sees tears in her eyes. It was so heartfelt. I am enjoying the story and love to edit for you. Thank you!
K-cullen13 chapter 16 . 12/16/2009
Really great chapter :), Edwards present for bella was really really sweet , yay abit of lemon :P so happy they trust each other now that they can move to that step in their relationship, dying for the next chapter, please update soon, cant wait :D
mountainlion718 chapter 16 . 12/16/2009
i hope it works out for them, she finally needs to be happy and enjoy her life
Alliesmom07 chapter 16 . 12/16/2009
YAY! A little lemon! I'm so glad that they are trusting each other so completely now, and that Edward is thinking about a life with Bella. I hope that Bella will think about a life with Edward as well...who knows? Update soon!
babybaby15 chapter 16 . 12/16/2009
I loved it
sugunary chapter 16 . 12/16/2009
Great chapter- cant wait for the next one!
mountainlion718 chapter 15 . 12/15/2009
oh boy, i wonder if he'll even talk to her once she gets home. i hope she'll forgive him eventally, but she told him she hates him and that takes alot to get over
mountainlion718 chapter 14 . 12/15/2009
i hope she doesen't decide to leave after hearing the conversation between Em, Edward & Carlisle.
twilightmom1 chapter 15 . 12/14/2009
Poor Bella, she is having such a hard time. I really hope she apologizes to Edward, he is just trying to help her, because he loves her!
Knit Bit chapter 15 . 12/14/2009
Graf...I love it! This was such an awesome chapter...it really had a lot of growth in it. It was really really good. Next up...the lemon. Lol. Will I have to skim over that one? lol. Thanks so much for a great story, and also thanks for telling us about the girl near your hometown. It is sad that in this day and age, stuff like that still happens under people's noses and no one has a clue.
sonogal chapter 15 . 12/14/2009
This was a very emotional chapter. It was very good. I feel for Edward. He doesn't know what to do for Bella, but he loves her so much.
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