Reviews for If This Is Fate
mmiiaa chapter 22 . 2/18/2011
wow that was long but i loved every part especially the tattoos :D
mmiiaa chapter 21 . 2/18/2011
see its that false sense of security you give then in the authors note you pull it all away lmao loved it all the same lol and like she would say no come on lol :D
mmiiaa chapter 20 . 2/18/2011
oh its getting good :D
mmiiaa chapter 19 . 2/18/2011
loved it im still scared though lol
mmiiaa chapter 18 . 2/16/2011
uh oh uh oh ive kinda been avoiding this story cause you told me it would get worse lol :S but ow i wanna finish it im scared teehee :D
angstaddict09 chapter 28 . 2/15/2011
It's hard for me to believe your story only has 503 reviews. I should have reviewed earlier but what can I say. I suck at leaving reviews. This was a very hard story to read. Not bad, just difficult. However, I'd be concerned with my own ability to have compassion if I breezed through it. I come from an abusive home (nothing like this) and work with abused / neglected children every day. Regardless of the situation, it never gets any easier to deal with and I thought you portrayed that well. There were times I was frustrated with both Bella and Edward but then I had to stop myself. These are teenagers, not adults. And you wrote them so perfectly. I can't imagine any teen dealing with these circumstances better. None of it was rushed. And the truth is, when there is abuse going on, that family will do anything and everything in their power to normalize the situation which in turn very effectively hides the abuse. You know you can turn to others for help but it takes a lot of trust and pretty much everything in your life has taught you not to trust anyone. I bawled and parts and jumped around excitedly in others. Great story! You did a great job of developing characters and staying true to the story. I loved it! Thank you!
mmiiaa chapter 17 . 2/14/2011
i hate you right now lol :D
mmiiaa chapter 16 . 2/14/2011
wooohooo finally lol i got so engrossed in this story i looked at my clock and it said 5:43 am lmao i think im going to go to bed i wanna try and finish your story by tomorrow lol i love it :D
mmiiaa chapter 15 . 2/14/2011
aww poor bella i could never imagine anything like this happening to me im so great full it never has :D
mmiiaa chapter 14 . 2/14/2011
aww so sweet i hope is all fluff now lol im sure its not but a girl can hope right loved it :D
mmiiaa chapter 13 . 2/14/2011
omg i cried so much but i have a feeling its far from over lol
mmiiaa chapter 12 . 2/13/2011
no no no no no i was hoping leah would grab his gun and shoot him that would be good :D
mmiiaa chapter 11 . 2/13/2011
:D :D :D :D :D
mmiiaa chapter 10 . 2/13/2011
aww that was so sweet im loving this so far :D
mmiiaa chapter 9 . 2/12/2011
love love love it so far
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