Nice chapter! I loved it! I only have one problem with reading phone sex. It makes me giggle. A lot.

I really loved this story so much...
You write beautifully!

Awesome story:)

It took me days to read this story, and I enjoyed every second of it! So much smexy smex I think I had like 60 blood transfusions! The underlying plot was entertaining as well, but I loved how much sex was going on. It was relate-able to real life, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very well done. )

this was one of the best stories i have ever read. it made me laugh, tear up, get mad, and my fav it made me curse A LOT XD lol i luv cursing ( i don't know y but i find it fun) you did a brilliant job on this 3

HELL YEAH! you go Shinji! and damn Noni you maaaaad shmart XD

very interesting story :)thank you

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so far so good :D and its not one of those stories that you can barely understand because the grammer and english is so bad (ADDED BONUS!)

YES HE PUNCHED HIM! XD good job Ichi

noooo Renji, Hisagi whyyyyyyyyyy!

You not only need a warning for rape, you need to change the genre as rape is not "Romance", and you also need to research what real rape victims go through because there are very real, and serious, consequences to such acts.

Rape is the worst violation a person can experience; it is abuse that is mental, physical and sexual and (despite the many terribly misinformed fanfiction writer) the victim does not 'enjoy' the experience nor do they fall in love with their attacker.

Climax doesn't equal consent, arousal doesn't equal consent either; arousal (and consequently) climax are merely physiological reactions. They do not denote enjoyment or acceptance; they are reactions to stimulation that the male body cannot counter or ignore. It does not mean that the act is something that 'they really want'.

I hope that your story/stories are removed from this site and that your account is deleted. Real rape victims don't need people like you spreading more misinformation, or outright lies, about how their experiences should have been 'great fun' and that they should just 'forgive their attackers' or worse 'fall in love with them' (heard constantly through stories here).

I know real victims and they deserve to be treated better. I don't wish such atrocities on anyone but if, god forbid, it happens to you then I hope that you have people who are better than you to listen and help you cope. Even you deserve better than someone with your mindset.

yay Tesla the teddy bear is here 3 lol

aww Kitty-kat got some kittens c: and my dude Hisagi is here XD

Oh my god! That was totally the best story I've read yet! You should consider writing more grimmichi stories like this one. I know for a fact they'd be a hit! Thanks for writing this amazing story that's kept me acting perverted myself for the last couple days while reading it.

Kate