Reviews for Questionable Hobbies
edeN chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I just kept laughing and smiling like a ninny, whatever a ninny is. The story flowed perfectly, but my main concern is that you mashed some words together, for example, you wrote "therightway" as one word when it should be "the right way". But that's the only error I found. This was just beautiful!
DancingKirby chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Well, it was a great idea, and well-executed for the most part, but the ending was rather abrupt. I mean, you have Jack say that very Jack-like line, which seems to be a set-up for at least some more lines of dialogue, but then it just...ends.
Adreus chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
I can't stop cackling, oh man. _Everyone_ is so perfectly in character (especially Carly) and the absurdity of the plot doesn't even seem out of place in the 5D's universe. I love your dialogue and the ending. Poor Carly. Poor, lucky Carly.
fangirlwithapen chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
OH GOSH THAT WAS SO ADORABLEEEEEE!11 I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
Stardust647 chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
So cute! I hope to read more of your stories of Jack and Carly!
beautiful-surreal chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
XD

Poor Carly! XD I can just feel her humiliation. Poor girl. XD
Peach Wookiee chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I am laughing very hard right now, Qu-ko. And I love how Carly has more or less gotten her revenge on Angela. An adult toy shop is perfect! Good work!
My Thyla My Captain chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
LOL, HILARIOUS! U caught Jack perfectly with the whole glaring and yelling without REALLY yelling. Jack is a jerk-but i luv jerks!So funny! I just kept cracking up! Y was she even in that shop anyways. I would have said no, and poor carly. Poor, klutzy Carly. Always in the wrong place at the wrong time! And the magazine! At first I was like 'WAT?' and i was like Jack isnt a... ahem... model for still it was so LOL! AWESOME! KEEP IT UP!

I LOVE JACK ATLAS
Sannabunny27 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Funny story.

I love how Yuusie was disrespondent in her time of need and Angela in the porn shop.
secret info chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
That was funny!
Fenikkusu Ai chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
This was really entertaining! You even made the twins likeable, and I usually think they're annoying. Carly's dialouge really stood out for me as well. It was very her. :)
DigitalStarry chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Oh god I'm cracking up over this. Its hilarious, and I think you everyone down ICly. I noticed you clump italicized words together, but I suppose that was intentional right?

"By writing from experience and not fantasy!" he shouted in response, practically glaring at her at this point, though not quite."

That line killed me, brilliant :)
Valentine Lissar chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Ah.

You've captured EVERYTHING that I love and HATE about Jack/Carly. I loved the sheer absurdity of Carly's situation...and I literally had to stop reading towards the end because I can totally relate to Carly's awkwardness and mortification at Jack's sudden appearance. Really, my insides were twisting.

But I came back to it...and liked the ending. Jack is such an arrogant jerk-I love him and I think you captured his personality perfectly. PLEASE KEEP WRITING JACK/CARLY. We need more fics about them.
Higuchimon chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Oh, God, that was hilarious. Beyond hilarious. I loved every second of it. I'm most certainly not a 5Ds expert but I'm certain you got them more IC than I could. Heh. This is why you keep your fanfic on your COMPUTER, not in a notebook. ;)