|Reviews for The Power|
| Nemaya chapter 10 . 4/1
DAD?! Omg... I did SO not see that coming. *continues reading*
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/26
Stop breaking up the narrative every other paragraph, and cite who is speaking (especially after jumping to a new scene).
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 11 . 3/6
Different scenario, same result. Same plot line.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 9 . 3/6
Darn, I thought the ferret was out of the equation.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 5 . 3/6
I like Genn too. I will hate you if you harm her.
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 2 . 3/6
Stupid Sirius and stupid Harry too for calling for Padfoot whom he knew was a wanted man.
| M4RKL4R chapter 10 . 2/20
Great line there at the end. Haven't seen a story with that familial line, great ingenuity. Keep up the good work.
| DSwiftblade chapter 14 . 2/9
really long but great chapter here i really liked how you used orson scott cards books to make some history there. really well written so far.
| Muirnin chapter 29 . 12/25/2013
well I am glad you had finally posted Chapter 29 ... (Commenting nearly a year later *LOL*) I had pulled all of my stories off of FFN a long time ago and only started reposting on here a couple of years ago ... but of course because of books 5-7 ( add 5 in there because Sirius is dead!) I was so disillusioned that I have had trouble writing HHR storys anymore ... but as I'm sure you may have seen I am still reading them and I am actually writing again ... of course I have chosen another Delusional coupling that of Kurt and Rachel from Glee ... and in less than 60 days I have written unbelievably over 90,000 words ... I have very few followers and even less reviews than I had while writting HP but it is giving me a creative outlet ... My yahoo group Muirnin's Musings on Yahoo hasn't had anyone post or say anything in a few years but I keep the group just because ... its sad that you have taken your group away ... cause we do love your work and even those that nit pick or bitch moan and complain really don't truly grasp the true reason why many of us write ... for our own enjoyment and to really see if we can create an ideal that has no bearing on canon ... at least that is what I have done now ...
Thanks again for writing ...
Muirnin - who will be forever delusional with Harry and Hermione ... and always will ship what is right over what was too frickin' easy (and sqwicky)
| Muirnin chapter 16 . 12/24/2013
with regards to Queen Boudica ... There is a belief that she was buried between platforms 9 and 10 in King's Cross station in London, England. There is no evidence for this and it is probably a post-World War II invention that is from wikipedia ... how interesting that ... between platforms 9 and 10 ... right where the supposed platform 9 3/4 is located at ...
| Muirnin chapter 10 . 12/24/2013
I appreciate that you have posted this story again or made corrections ... edits whatever to it ... I had read it a long time ago and still delight in the reading ...
I have to say I always appreciate when a fellow writer notes about the obvious lack of intelligence that JKR had for her last two books ... I personally add the 5th book mainly for killing off Sirius as he was a character that had so much potential ... and they didn't even use that death properly in the context of making Harry stronger or the loss of his life ... how it affected the psychological issues that Harry had grown up with ... and don't get me started on WEASLEY lore ...
Thanks a bunch for this story I'm going to go back to reading ...
Muirnin - while in JKR's words I'm delusional but I will ALWAYS ship what is right over what was way too easy!
| DestroyerDRT chapter 28 . 11/27/2013
What happened with what was found in the tomb?
| Deniceb87 chapter 22 . 11/15/2013
This is such a wonderful story. The chapters are long and the ideas are complex. It's definetly worth the read!
| Filmsmith chapter 29 . 11/9/2013
I really enjoyed your story. Nice crossovers. Don't change a thing.
| David M. Potter chapter 29 . 10/28/2013