Reviews for Time Paradox
Heraklinios chapter 7 . 2/23/2010

Dude, this is going from crazy to manly insane. I like it!

Now, we need a Michael Jackson inside the story, or maybe Minato could make a cameo!

But it is your choice. Anyways, thanks for the chapter!
mom calling chapter 7 . 2/23/2010
While all this madness is going on, what's doin' in the real world? Does Tifa know where Cloud went? Is there a doppelganger Cloud left for her? Nice to see Aeirith's aim is still more or less good and she has enough stuff to keep throwing...Nanaki's speech is funny as heck even tho I can't figure out half of it... thx for this. Rock on... mc
Kittindear chapter 6 . 2/11/2010
Love, love, love, LOVE everything expect Red's voice. Its confuzzlering. :/ But I LOVE the whole "Do you have an appt.?" "No, but I gots death just for you from da Buster Blade!" Ahahaha. Im tired.
Fayneir chapter 6 . 2/9/2010
O_O, all this references are hilarious. I laughed so much, that I almost choked on a biscuit, Must NEVER eat while reading a hilariously funny fic EVER again. Looking forward to the next chapter.
TenshiReike chapter 6 . 2/4/2010
This story has me laughing just about 80% of the time. It did wonders for my mood after all my homework was done! Great job and I hope you post soon.
Slackerman811 chapter 6 . 2/3/2010
I remember finding this story a few months back but I didn't know it was you. Jesus, weird ain't it? And I think everybody imagined Red 13 with Scooby's voice. Hell I'm surprised you didn't make a Scooby and Shaggy joke with Barret.
kitsune13 chapter 6 . 2/2/2010
sometimes I suspect, though he'd deny it, that this particular Cloud is enjoying the chance to act just a little bit crazy. And I definitely think he's enjoying knowing (for once) what's going on (mostly). Points of note? I love the way Cloud's just rolling with things (aforementioned chance to be a little crazy included but not exclusive). The way you handled those painfully long and drawn out flashbacks at Elmyra's house managed to keep me reading and chuckling instead of skimming passed (kudos! I am very grateful for the way you manage that for the more, elongated sections of the game's storyline). That Elmyra is racist! - I knew that 'dear, sweet' old lady was all just a front. And she's so calm and factual about it. Cloud's response to 'Aerith's been asking questions about you' was priceless and it was nice of Tifa to pick the glass out of him afterward. Aerith has apparently been teaching Marlene 'ancient speak'. thank you many times over for including Barret's bit about the gold wire of hope - in the game it was too much and it's just absolutely perfect here too. So Tidus had the honey bee card - why am I not surprised? tsk tsk Interesting concept about Cloud's sleeping habits. And THANK YOU - I hated that part in the game where we had to sneak passed the statues. Constantly remember getting caught and having to do it all over again. I like Cloud's solution much better. Poor Tifa, trying to be the voice of sanity - lol. Wedge! That was gold and I'll leave it at that. Hojo does remind me of gollum. And, very intelligent way to deal with Jenova and Cloud's not kiboshing it the way he has everyone else. I like it and it adds weight both to the moment and to Cloud's sometimes casual romp through this world. The responsibility and the repercussions. So Red sounds like Scooby? I'm diggin' that. At least he seems semi-sane. Always did like Red. And Tseng - sneaky bastard with his neck pinch. That was beautiful. Another great chapter that had me laughing until my eyes watered. And it showed up in the inbox just when I really needed something like that. You're gold! Please, please keep up the excellent work.
BlazingFireAngelXXX chapter 6 . 2/2/2010
Die Hard References? _
JessMusicNote chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
Loved this chapter! it was wicked and so funny!
mom calling chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
This is just great! I'd say worth the wait, but I don't want you guys to slack off or nothin'... Very fine stuff and thanks for it. Is the rest of your life (lives) as cookoo-do you perhaps live in dusty library stacks, think weighty ponderous scholastic and deeply philosophical thoughts about the meaning of it all and the destiny of life in this universe and beyond? and this is your one outlet for that spark of fun-ness that you cannot deny? Or are you just as crazy as this writing indicates you are, with deep connection to video gaming culture?'s a hoot for me to tag along. Thanks again! mc
Sir Godot chapter 5 . 1/11/2010
Man, I love the humor XD

It's great to read something that isn't so serious from time to time, and you definitely provided me with great stuff

Keep up the good work,

kitsune13 chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
perhaps I'm just tired but I found this chapter as enjoyable as the others. I laughed at the way Cloud is learning to handle Aeris and her weapons' speak, I appreciated the fact that even though, technically he's not supposed to go there, he's finding this Tifa as attractive as his own, I enjoy the fact that he'd been emotionally scarred from the last trip to the Don's and he's NOT doing a replay. Period. End of story. And I laughed that Aeris keeps bringing it up. He is changing this world for the 'slightly' better despite the fact everyone's crazy in it - ie. Jessie, Wedge, and Biggs will all live now and the Don will not be showing up later on to kidnap (though that changes things with the Turks - and yet it doesn't, because Reno's already - ah, it's just as crazy trying to predict as it's characters are - and I'm LOVING it! I have also been aware - this Cloud doesn't pull any punches. I can appreciate that even though it perhaps makes him a bit darker. When you know how things are going to go - wouldn't you eliminate the threats to what you cared about before hand? it's a surprisingly serious and potent combination to add to your zany mix but to me it just makes things that much more grounded which is a nice addition to the times we're all flying high as a kite. Reno is a trip, Cloud is protective and sane, Tifa is a 'let's get this done' personality - and of course, yeah, I caught that. Barret is still seeing spiders (ha! bad pun) in the last sentence.
jaredhimself31 chapter 5 . 11/27/2009
This story is crazy, I shudder to think how Sephiroth will behave.
Toraudewa chapter 3 . 11/26/2009
Mali:I like Cloud acepting he is Sephiroth clone. -Run around in circle and squeal-.

Tora: -_-' Sorry, for that it was Mali... I think she smoked what Baret is smoking... But i liked that part too. _

Mali: -Puuf her cheeks angrily-. I didn't smoke anything.

Tora: -_-' It's even more disturbing.

Mali: K... Maybe i did... But not as much as him and i don't see spider.

Tora: Na, ya see manga's/novel's/moivie's/anime's/video game's character's.

Mali: You drank as mush as i smoke. And you see the same thing as me pink elephant. So. Piss off.

Tora. -Sigh and look back to Samjaz-. We liked your story greet job.
BlazingFireAngelXXX chapter 5 . 11/25/2009
No Cloudina? Aw...
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