I enjoyed seeing the enhanced abilities in a case-fic. Thanks for this one-shot.

AHHHHHH! TV reference! 3 that show, haven't seen it for awhile, though. :( good job!:D

It was good. Thanks, Tracy

Very good sequel. I like that your stories always have a little Tony-whump in them, too.

Wonderful work! More, please. Thank you.

Ran across this while looking at crackvan. Very good crossover, and also nice to see a story in this vein that is gen. Loved it.

Interesting, I love Gibbs/Tony paternal bonding! :) I think it would be fun to read Gibbs going crazy on Tony's father... ;) Anyway, thanks for writing! I look forward to reading more stories! :)

Aw, Tony :(. I loved how he used his senses during the case. He's just starting to feel confident enough in them that he can try using them to help rather than try to close them down to avoid a zone. It can't have been easy with all the loud background noise in the bar. It's just sad that he got hurt doing it- hopefully that won't dent his willingness to try again.

As for his revelations to Gibbs: ::hugs him:: Stupid DiNozzo Snr! So many of Tony's issues can be traced back to that man, but I'm glad that Gibbs is there now, doing his best to ease those issues :).

YAAY! I'm so glad I've checked back. Very nice. And threatening Tony's date always makes me feel warm and fuzzy. Sounds like Tony and Jim have had less than stellar support from their fathers, though I think Dinozzo Sr. wins on the World's Worst award. Thanks for writing more on this storyline! Feel free to continue. _~

Well, I do hope you get a multi-chapter out soon, cause I want to read it! :P In the mean time, this was a great piece even if it was too short. But considering it's after midnight, maybe it's just as well it's not longer I loved the Tony/Gibbs interaction, both of them protecting each other. Sleepy Tony was so sweet :P Hope to get more from you soon, happy writing.

Glad to see the sequel. Want more. But I did not find it at first cause for some reason it had Jackson Gibbs & Tony. Did ff make a mistake, cause I noticed that they now have instead of LJ Gibbs its now Leroy Jetro Gibbs.

Oh, a sequel! I'm so thrilled! It was so fun to meet Sentinel-Tony and Guiding Gibbs again.

Loved the driving scene in the beginning - 'it had diluted the hair-raising effect of it' and in the bar - 'Uh oh. Making Gibbs repeat himself: that was an uncontested brain burp.' LOL

Great work, my friend! I hope you have many more stories on the way.

Love! /Belker

this was very good...i would LOVE to read more of it.

alisa

Great to see more in this AU and you're right about them not using Jim's senses as much to solve crimes. Very nice case; great wrap up and love that Tony listened and hear the change when she was getting upset. I can see Tony just instinctly protecting Gibbs and stopping the attack; nice work. Love how crankily protective Gibbs is and that he found out about Tony's father. I'm sure Gibbs will have a lot of help "taking care" of DiNozzo senior not just Abby. I bet Abby would be very careful and very creative in her method. Thanks for posting this and hope to see more in this AU.

Yay, another Sentinel crossover! *bounces* Enjoyed this so very much. I just love how you make the idea of Sentinels work here; you blend it in so well. Not to mention, it's just too much fun to see hyper-sensitive lie-detector Tony. *g* And Gibbs being super-protective. And aw, poor Tony! Having to go through such strangeness as a kid, with an entirely unsympathetic father. :( (Heh, and grounding him until he "came to his senses" *is* rather ironic here, isn't it? :P)

Loved it! Can't wait to see more, naturally! _