Reviews for The Peril Within
Ryuu chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Ah ha ha, NOW we're getting somewhere... *cheers for Makoto getting an eye-opener* Cute scene with Rei and Minako by the way, now Makoto just needs to face up to how she feels about Ami and do something about it. _ Luna's response about having to have a chat with Rei and Minako about their relationship is rather omnious though.
Jonathan Priest chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
This story is so sweet and I love the slow development of feelings between Ami and Makoto. They are my favorite fiction couple and I think they work perfectly together.

I'm really anxious to find out what Ami learned about Kiriko that has her so shocked. I'm guessing he's her son, which explains his hair and eye color, as well as control over the storm. Though the lightning portion could also be part of Jupiter's power, though how those two could have a kid...yeah, that just doesn't work. Anyway, anxiously waiting for more.
Coot chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
This is a very engaging story with a nice mix of mystery and romance. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
amimakofan24 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
aw... ami is really sweet helping mako-chan like that... really glad you updated so quickly! update soon!
Renkhal chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Wow... Makoto's doing some massive soul searching...

Good chapter. Please keep it going.
Rukangel chapter 2 . 10/16/2009
i like it it got me involved with it lets see how it turns out to be
amimakofan24 chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
oh... suspicion... kiriko disappeared the same time that boy came to attack... hope you will update soon! thanks for the second chapter!
Renkhal chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Hm... Something's fishy here...

There are a lot of strange coincidences going on.

Good chapter! Keep it going!
ChrisGranger chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I know I have read something familiar or even equal. Is a rewritten story? The title is the same.
PrincessS chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I haven't read any Makoto's fanfic lately and when I'm back I saw this story. I love it and it so sweet. Please continue it :D
Jonathan Priest chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
What a cute beginning to a very good story. I am eagerly awaiting more.
Knight of Balinor chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
"I know there is more to you than you let on, we just have to find some way to bring it out."

Suggestions:

To get a really mad Ami (as in oh look the next ice age):

take away her books

take away her library card

swap her library card for a children's card

take away here internet access

To get a blushing Ami

show here the community of Ami/Mako fic here on fanfiction

go to divantart and to a search for ami and makoto

reveal to makoto that she is the one posting all the Mercury/Jupiter fan poetry

to get a sex-crazed ami

...

...

...

booze?

...idk

to get parental ami:

put any small child in her path and have it look at her with sad puppy dog eyes

fail a test

fail to to study for failed test

put a small child with a booboo

make sure the child phrases it as booboo

that about covers it.
sailormoonfan24 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
I cant wait to find out more about kiriko-kun! I'm hooked on your fanfic so I hope you will continue!
amimakofan24 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
pls pls pls update soon! i am a major mako/ami fan (as you can tell by my name!) and i am enjoying wat you have written so far. hope you will continue and update this fanfic soon!
Hobbes the Cat chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Always happy to see a new, good Ami/Makoto story posted. looks interesting so far, so keep up the good work!
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