Reviews for 15 Step
wanderingsoul92 chapter 16 . 3/20/2011
she's at that "i'm no good for my significant other" means something big is about to happen...can't wait till the next chapter
Willow chapter 16 . 3/17/2011
Well first off I really love how you capture the badass in Edward. He seems like he is always pissed at someone, but really he is a gentlemen. Some writers think if you throw a leather jacket on a charecter and give them a kaleidoscopic sexual past that there atomatically a badass.

Update soon.
Willow chapter 3 . 3/13/2011
Did you just steal my presonality?

I can relate to this Bella.
ClancyJane chapter 16 . 3/9/2011
Fucking Brilliant : )
violet halo chapter 16 . 3/8/2011
I love your story and cant wait for the update. I will wait patiently until then!
InLoveWithALion chapter 16 . 3/6/2011
Soooooo... About that update... I know! It's been ages since you started this story... I know because yours was my first fanfic! Yeah I found it without looking... How was that? Oh!.. Well I was looking for some RobPorn and stumbled over twiwarted! Awesome place you got there! I visit often looking for an 'update'..! Yeah I'm hoping some peer presure will work... I should know better! How about I send you some Rob-kisses ooor maybe some rob-dreamy-sexing against the wall behind the kitchen door... Ok I wish that too but I hope the image in your head is enuf to entice you? Just push the hubbie and imagine the rest!

Best of luck! Wishing on an update!

;) Cheers, Tony!
alwayssappy chapter 16 . 3/1/2011
Narcys-crazydaisy chapter 16 . 2/27/2011
WOW This is a really good story, WOW! I hope Bella opens up to Edward soon, before she explodes or ends up in the hospital. I also hope that James ends up dead somewhere before he gets to Bella, I have a feeling he isn't giving up. Thanks for sharing
Miss Snazzy chapter 9 . 2/10/2011
Great chapter. So Charlie is just a good guy that cares about Bella? That's better than him really being her father and just keeping it secret like I had expected. I like that Bella finally had her little confrontation with Renee. It was nice to see Bella tell her off.
Miss Snazzy chapter 8 . 2/10/2011
This chapter was just painful. In a good way, of course. I couldn't keep a few tears from leaking out. I wonder what Edward's problem is. Was he adopted? Did he used to be poor? Is that what Rosalie meant when she said they were perfect for each other? Part of me wanted Bella to continue avoiding Edward, while another was dying for them to make up. I hope they'll start to open up to each other.
Miss Snazzy chapter 7 . 2/10/2011
Great chapter. I wouldn't have eaten there either. It's sad that he said she ruined everything. I wonder what Charlie will do to her when she goes home. /
Miss Snazzy chapter 6 . 2/10/2011
Great chapter. Loved the sweater challenge. Lol. )
Miss Snazzy chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
Good chapter. )
Miss Snazzy chapter 4 . 2/9/2011
Great chapter. I almost started to cry myself. Both from what she's going through and my own memories. I really love this story so far. I should be doing my homework or sleeping, but I can't seem to stop reading.. I think Charlie is really her dad.
Miss Snazzy chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
Great chapter! I love how Bella actually fought back. I mean, I'm all for a dominant Edward, but it's so much better when Bella can give just as good, instead of cowering all feebly. I really identify with Bella, particularly her need for music. I had a crappy home-life and without my ipod, I think I would've gone insane long ago.
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