Reviews for Delta of Mercury
arfalcon chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
Oh no.
bmango chapter 13 . 10/11/2009
These are awesome! Getting glimpses of Rose and why she is how she is. And I couldn't imagine having to work off the prompts, too. You are amazing... -b
arfalcon chapter 2 . 10/11/2009
So this is a diary Rose started writing when she was 6? Yeah, I guess she's really letting Emmett in. She's probably frightened by the prospect of Emmett going to college.

Enough Freud. You just posted a zillion chapters, so I'm off to read!
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 13 . 10/11/2009
Sounds crazy to me! I like crazy.

cabr chapter 13 . 10/11/2009
Awesome, what a view into their world from a mysterious perspective.
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 12 . 10/11/2009
Love the Jasper comment. Sorry I am babbling.

arfalcon chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
My reaction to Emmett's finding Rose's diary is a feather light "Oh!". I like Emmett and Rose stories, and I love that this one is an extension of your beautifully lyric "Tropic of Virgo".

I know this will be another wonderful story.
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 11 . 10/11/2009
Oh. Boy. Not good.

Rut ro.
whitewave320 chapter 13 . 10/11/2009

Decided not to leave a review for every chapter, but am loving this insight into Rose. You have a unique way of building stories, and I love watching how Rose is growing up through the diary entries.

Loved how Alice was referred to as a voracious butterfly, and how the cowboy boots Jasper wears were their dads...
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 10 . 10/11/2009
That was a great visual. Seems like she is noticing Emmett more.

bmango chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
Damn...that's blunt. And I guess, all Rose. But, damn. -b
Nolebucgrl chapter 13 . 10/11/2009
You say a lot with very few words. I envy that. Fascinating look at Rose.
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 9 . 10/11/2009
I think I almost woke the baby.

Fav: they made Jasper do a headstand until he passed out because he only had thirty cents on him.


addictedtotwilight79 chapter 8 . 10/11/2009
LOL. Love Alice. That is a great way to get him to stop smoking.

bmango chapter 2 . 10/11/2009
Wow - her journal goes back to age 6? This will be everything. Wow. -b
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