Reviews for The Fox and The Geomancer
Critic chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
look dude I'm not a flamer or
nothing I like your story but all I need to say is the next time you decide to put lyrics of a song in the story try to remember that we can't hear any damn music... okay
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
ok
dreamgirl chapter 4 . 12/16/2013
i know you was doing to good like all men good start no finish.
omally-dood chapter 3 . 8/30/2010
hmmmmm interesting i wonder whats going 2 happen next
Masteria chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
I wish for more, you must give me what I wish... j/k Nice story btw...
shadownartuo666 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
a very good story but about terras powers it is my thought

that maybe shr is not all hunman maybe she could be a half-demon or s half-god that would be cool also it would tell us

why she had so much troble with her powers but it is up to you with what u want to do pleaes update soon and good job on the fic so far there are not enough naruto/terra pairs out there also i will add your story to my c2 and have a nice weekend
Kyuubi16 chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
Hey guy when do you plan on contacting me about that Lemon?
Kyuubi16 chapter 3 . 1/22/2010
Ok guy you seriously need a beta. I have a hard time trying to read this story. In fact I only skimmed a few parts. Capitalization and Punctuation are needed. Its an interesting story and all but the story feels really choppy.
RogueNya chapter 3 . 1/10/2010
Well this is very interesting really, look forward to seeing this continues along with their training. And of course when time comes to return.
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 3 . 12/11/2009
awesome story
rallyracer1324 chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
like the story but i suggest you rewrite it there is no way anybody will give that much info right off the bat
Red Jeanie chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Please update!
ragnrock kyuubi chapter 3 . 10/15/2009
this is a really good story and I hope to read more chapters soon
Mech-Wolf009 chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
Good chapter, needs more explosions, perhaps naruto in a tokyo drift-like race across the city :D .

I was also wondering, how is Terra going to fight in areas without earth around them? Will she pull a Gaara with a gourd of sand?
Hades45 chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
Great chapter. I like the kung fu/chef OC. Please update soon.
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