Reviews for The Necklace
HP.Twilight.LoverHM chapter 15 . 5/1/2010
awesome chapter and cant wait to read more of polar night and the newborn.
shutterbugdeb chapter 16 . 4/21/2010
Uh, no! I don't know who it is. The only one I can think of is Aod.

Regardless, your story had me mesmerized. I'm not usually a fan of stories that don't have Edward/Bella as their main focus, but after reading Prelude, The Last Night and almost all of Polar Night, I decided that The Necklace was worth a gander. The story did not disappoint.

There were enough lemons to keep the smutty part of my brain happy, but I really got a kick out of all the faery lore. There was obviously a lot of research involved in gathering all the information needed to transport us to the sidhe.

Please, keep your fingers flying over the keyboard and get more chapters updated for us for Polar Night.
Maki-san chapter 16 . 4/21/2010
Hi! can't wait to see how the story ends in Polar night, I'm confused about the necklace (which of all those it was?) But I'm pretty sure that in the end Bella was talking...

Hope to see more updates about The Newborn!
EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 16 . 4/17/2010
who is the newborn at the end? was it Alice or Bella?that confused me so much!
InkAddict89 chapter 16 . 4/14/2010
AMAZING...Could the newborn by Aod? Can't wait for this story to continue in Polar Night!
Esmee S. Cullen chapter 16 . 4/13/2010
Great ending but what does it all mean. I am must be really slow but who is the newborn?
bmthespian chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
Another great chapter... I look forward to seeing what is up with the necklaces
baynewen chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
I'll take it on faith that the answers to my questions will come with Polar Night, this has been a strange journey but interesting!
Scrimmy chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
I got a little confused but I am sure I will sort it out through Polar Night. I believe the newborn at the end was Alice-her first memory. I agree with Carlisle, I know they were sworn to the 50 year crap but I think they all need to know everything so they can determine their best course of action and also because it is now very obvious that Aro wants Bella as he anticipates the strong gift she will have and he figures if he gets her she can shield all of them and Edward will no doubt never leave his mate so Aro figures he can get them both. But Bella definitely needs to know the truth. She needs to make informed decisions. Can't wait to read more of polar night to clear up any confusion.

LY, Bobbie
nat300 chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
i really liked this chapter but the last part of the epilogue really confused me i hope im not the only one.
xXx 'M' NaMeS RoCk xXx chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
i have absolutely no clue who the newborn is? hope im nt the only 1..? lol! cant wait 4 it 2 tie into polar nite so i can find out the answers! lmao, luved the story thou, it woz the 1st alice jasper story i read! D
siriusyellowlab chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
So much information in this epilogue - and I'm dying even more for Polar Night to continue!

I'm worried about the faerie necklaces that Bella received. I guess that the one with the stone will be instrumental in her becoming pregnant. I'm worried that the other one will make it difficult for her to become a vampire?

As for the identity of the newborn: could it be Aod? I don't know if a full blooded fae can become a vampire, but it's the only idea I have.
Snusa chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
tnx you so much for sharing this travel with us :)

paisleypus chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
Noo! I don't want this to end *cries* Gah, Edward! You shouldn't hide that note from your wife! Listen to Jasper on this :P Loved it. Aine sent a wedding gift? Interesting. Loved the ending. :)
Equivamp chapter 16 . 4/12/2010
"That was all it took to divert Edward's attention, and my smile broadened as I watched Edward bask in Bella's radiance, as if with my words, he was seeing her for the first time all over again."

it was beautiful seeing edward and bella's love for each other through their family's eyes

i laughed when i saw the parrots reference, dirty birds, lol

i liked carlisle part in the story;

"'s time that Esme, Bella and I were informed..." how he includes bella

im going to take a wild guess and say alice visions were mess up because of the fairy necklace and that the newborn was alice.

anyways it was an amazing ending and i cant wait to see what you have planned for the rest of polar night.
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