|Reviews for Breaking News|
| coltgal chapter 26 . 10/22/2013
Honestly this is probably the smartest and most well written piece of fan fic i've ever read:). It was really brilliant, funny and just a GREAT story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift here. I hope you found success with your book.
| lenniem chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
Tanya is an interesting character. Looking forward to reding more. Thank you
| Kate chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Hole Mother-effing CHRIST dude!
What the HELL?!
Like WOW! This is not something I normally, I bloody loathe reviewing with ALL MY HEART but SHIT this is F***ING good!
| ajcrackie chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
I love Emmett's entrance!
| ajcrackie chapter 8 . 10/11/2013
Oh dear, your story is stopping me from working! I can't put it down! I'm glad Alice has found Jasper. I love the uneasy dynamics you have created between Edward & Bella.
| hazelnuticecream chapter 26 . 10/9/2013
I absolutely adored this story. I had seen it pop up a couple of times before, but workplace competitive bella and edward usually isn't my favourite. But so many of my favourite authours loved this one, so I decided to read it. WOW. I could not put it down and read it all in 2 days. I adore your new characters, how you handled alice's dream, and the cleverness of all the CERN and ALICE parts. I am so excited to see what else you have written! Thank you :)
| Andromeda8V chapter 26 . 10/7/2013
Just the-read this story and I loved it even more this time around! So interesting and thrilling! Thank you so much!
| GingerGrey chapter 26 . 10/3/2013
What a great and funny story. I loved every second of it. Thank you!
| RunsfromReality chapter 26 . 10/2/2013
See you around the playground, indeed. Best of luck in all your ventures! And I truly think you will find it - this is an exceptional work and if it's any indication of what you're capable of producing on a regular basis, well ... I bow down to your greatness is a very enthusiastic Wayne's World style "we're not worthy, we're not worthy"
| RunsfromReality chapter 20 . 10/2/2013
I am just in awe of your narrative pacing and your ability to pack so much action into each paragraph without necessarily making us feeling like we're rushing along as readers, even though the characters are clearly rushing along in their lives.
You're a wonderful, highly talented writer with better chops than 99% of the people out there. And I read a lot - fan fic, self pub, and traditional books - so I'm not saying that lightly. You don't need my praise to continue being awesome, but know that you absolutely have it.
| RunsfromReality chapter 15 . 10/2/2013
So much in this chapter I don't even know where to begin. Loving it, though, and all the priceless one-liners that seem to flow effortlessly out of your character's mouths but probably took you ages to carefully craft. Well done you. Although I must say, for a reporter, Edward's not very good at keeping secrets.
| RunsfromReality chapter 13 . 10/2/2013
I followed some of the CERN story ... great to see you work it in here. Loving the dynamic dialogue, and hoping they can give some help to Alice before it's too late!
| RunsfromReality chapter 12 . 10/2/2013
Very nice ... I guess I didn't review much on the last chapter because I grew up in tornado alley, so skimmed a lot over stuff of nightmares text. Been there, don't that - not as extremely as the people in your story, but I don't rewatch my life on the news, you know? Much prefer this chapter, if only because we're back to the characters I like growing in their relationship with each other.
Also, I adore Kathy. She makes me think a little of Donna in Suits, though this was obviously - obviously - the universe's inspiration for that.
| RunsfromReality chapter 11 . 10/2/2013
Oh, the sadness for Bree ...
| RunsfromReality chapter 9 . 10/2/2013
Get used to disappointment? Do I sense shades of the Princess Bride in here?
I like what you're doing with Tanya's character - giving her more of a personality and not necessarily setting her up as an out-and-out villian. And Autumn, who sent me to read you, mentioned your capacity for creating complete worlds ... which this is. So, so very pleased to be reading.