Reviews for Breaking News
colleen5182 chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Sweet Jeebus I love these two! Keep up the amazing job! Are we going to get a chapter in EPOV? I'm interested in what he is thinking. Love it and can't wait for the next update
songster chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Wonderful, just wonderful. Again, you've created a win with your two main characters. I love the quick thinking snarkisms and cultural refs. Reminds me of the best of the Gilmores (I don't know if you were a fan at least of the dialogue, but Amy P is apparently working on a new show based on a mom who is a renowned author and her 3 ? daughters all of whom are living in an apartment building owned by mommy dearest). I always wished I had that kind of wit, but, alas, my rejoinders usually enter the brainpan hours after the initial comments. They are always good just way late! Am appreciating the info regarding news industry and in particular tv news which has never appeared to me to be anything more than talking heads.
ArcadianMaggie chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Love the chemistry between these two. I can't wait for more snarky banter. I'm curious why Edward insisted on Bella. Since he's one of the top journalists out there, I'm assuming he did his homework on her. Being able to get under her skin must be a bonus! Loved the Mary Hart bit, the "Oh, I'm wanted in many places" line, Bella's resolve to prove Peter wrong when he indicates that she's the less valuable of the two, the Alice mystery, and the incredible details about the biz. In fact, I loved it all!
staceygirl aka jackbauer chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
I'm so excited for tings to get going and both terrified and excited about but the butt cheek pinching. Where in the world is ALICE!
deni0804 chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
I love snarky Bella and snarky Edward. I can't wait to see more of their interactions and comebacks. Very sweet Bella wants to buy her dad his dream boat, it beats a cheesy convertible as a mid-life crisis toy, lol. It was sad about her celebrating such a huge accomplishment without Alice, so I hope her mom caves and calls Bella. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter, get ready for more sparks to fly. :)
edaddict3254 chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
thank you for the update! i'm loving your story!

i can't get enough of the snarky bs banter between edward and bella! this is going to be a really wild ride and i'm strapped in and ready to go! loved, loved, loved edward's line, "I call dibs on the camera-left chair," and "And the left side of anything else you ask me to share as well... " yeah, i'd give edward the left side of anything he wanted!

interesting that edward was only interested in signing on as long as he would be working with bella. so how does he know of her? did he know of her previously or was it their brief encounter that sold him on her?

i like your character peter. it sounds like he could be an integral character in this story.

can i get an invite to the dinner? please?

your writing really is incredible and i am waiting patiently (not) for more!
cshorte chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Great chapter!
Beanie Cullen chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
I'm so thrilled with the snarky banter between Edward & Bella, and I know it's just going to get better & better. Bring on the UST! I loved Port Angeles Players for a similar reason & because you combined it with the Bard. You're writing style is excellent and I'm excited to see where this story is going. Keep up the great work! Cheers!
jennilynnfl chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Third chapter is getting me sucked in! I'm getting really excited about this story. You do a great job with detail- now I'm learning a lot about the ins and outs of the news industry while reading an entertaining story- that's great! My husband worked for Neilsen for many years, so I'm very familiar with the ratings side of television. He left last year and I miss getting the heads up on which of my favorite shows are in danger of being pulled! Thanks for writing- you've got me all excited for the next chapter- I can't wait to *hear* the dialogue between those two crazy kids.
delusionalimperialist chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Totally worth the wait of getting some sleep.

Having once upon a time ago on my high school newspaper and taking it way too seriously, this fic just makes me giddy inside. The journalism in it is totally my porn at the moment, i love it so hard.

i can't wait to see this dynamic on air for the first time!

- Katie
edwards-debussy chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Mary Hart, huh? Ouch! His other innuendo-laced comment about anything else she wanted to share would have made my blood boil, too. I'm loving how much he's already getting under her skin and how she's ready to give as good as she gets. Will be interesting to see how Edward takes to it-but I have complete faith in his verbal sparring ability. Can't wait for the dinner!
dreampills chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
This story is AWESOME! Keep up the good work!
furious kitten chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
I hope Bella gets some nice shots in at Edward at the dinner, without it being too obvious to the execs. Also, thanks for explaining the Mary Hart thing- it made the seizures comment make much more sense!
gossip-bangkok chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
thanks! :)

3 it!
prospectcat chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
This put the biggest smile on my face this morning. Their banter is brilliant. I was seriously disappointed at the end of the chapter that they only got to have that one conversation. I'm so geared up for the dinner.

How am I supposed to get back to work now? :)
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