Reviews for Believe
MidnightReader1 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
hey haha great twist to the story edward wearing a ring to scare off the soccer moms:D Loved this one-shot. Keep up the good work! xx
romanticvamp11 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Haha, I squealed out loud when I read his daughter's name! That's my name! (Then I had to explain it all to my roommates . . . haha) I think this could definitely be expanded into a full on story if you wanted to.
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
That was awesome :)
kismit1496 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
shit - I need to put my boys in football apparently! Bella and I have a lot in common in this one! Well except for me being gorgeous LOL
Rebeca with one C chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
love it.
Luvntwilight chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Very nice.
stinkyfeet chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
it was a little scary when he was pushing her into the room and practically admitting his love for her. But it was cute. I liked it :0
Scarlet-Letter8 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
this was a great story. Im going right now to check out your other stories.

~ .Overrated~
edwardbabymomma chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I love it! Please make it into a full story.
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Short and sweet. I liked it.
blueheart93 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
That was good. I liked it.
Tiaaby chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Awesome! Love the little plot, I know this will only be one chapter but you should continue it! These two are very hot and what they have going on could be interesting.
maggiemay16 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
this should be a full story!
Cathrinee chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
DILFward is hot. I Love Edward with a little baggage.
icefang7 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
this is awsome! thanks
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