|Reviews for Public Displays of Affection|
| Darcdreams chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
lol, this was a great little drabble. I do hope you're going to write more...poor Kharg must have been so embarrased! I'm pleased to see someone else who appreciates Darc/Kharg too...none of that disgusting Darc/Lilia rubbish for me thank you! Anyway, really well written and very funny
| Daichitenski chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I liked the way you set this story up (I hope that you add more) anyway there was only one minor things that caught my attention:
In the first paragraph, the sentence:
"The darker male suspected that his brother was still angry with him for knocking over the bookshelf and smashing a vase earlier in the week and had bought him to the Inn solely to ensure he was staying out of trouble."
I think you meant "brought" not "bought"
(like i said really really minor)