Reviews for Don't Tell
alix33 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
"Ziva and Abby are huddled beneath a blanket;" - My guesses about the appearance of said blanket are: it is black, white and red plaid, like one of Abby's skirts; but it is made of a soft and cozy (no, sorry, not a soft and cozy, THE softest and coziest) kind of fibre (not scratchy Abby skirt fabric), maybe lambswool; and it is like the porridge, the chair and the bed of baby bear in the Goldilocks story in terms of warmth: just right.
JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Wow that was heartbreaking, very good
USAFChief chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Both Don't Ask and Don't Tell are very well written stories that dip from the well of human emotions very deeply. Your words are vivid descriptions of the terrors Ziva and Tim faced, with enough left to the reader's imagination to make it the most horrible situation that it could possible be.

Nice jog. I'm glad you have moved to NCIS to write your stories.

Thanks,
Ashes of Fire chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Wow, Gibbs not in control of something and almost losing it completely against Ziva, though I woud too. Thought that gibbs was chivalous though - so he really wouldn't do that. But I do love these one-shots and I hope for another one soon :D
Jess chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Can you do another one...pretty please? This was fantastic
suchrandomness chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Wow, that was intense. Wonderful story... I hope Tim is okay though.
sjl chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Loved it! Very like the show - poor Timmy always ignored and shoved off to the back burner, and totally under-rated until something out of character gets their attention
HalfwayThereNow chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
What was Tim's problem? What was he keeping in?
rabidsamfan chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
O

ouch

Third story? Please? Eventually?

*yikes!*