Reviews for Where I Went Wrong
thunderincrimson chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
HUN! this was beautiful! It was soo sad and emotional but I loved every word of it! The part about the rain and the sun at funerals was superb! Very well done!
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
What an emotional start with Lisa already dying. At least she told Ben that Dean was his father so they boy wouldn't be all alone in the world. Now I am very intrigued to see how Dean and Sam will deal with raising a child and how it will affect their lives.

It's a wonderful start to your word of caution: be careful of using "where" when in actuallity you mean "were"

I also suggest only putting in the warning that will cover the story...not all of them. If the need arises for one later, you can always put it in the author's note at the beginning.