wow 25 chapters aorth of explaining their training and then immediately you turn them all into scared cowering children. waated my time with this one

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Why end it this way, dumbest ending ever

I really injoyed you story and only hope the the next one lives up to it’s legacy!

Love it

Brilliant story. I loved the trunk, the familiars, the true prophecy and the griffin

A quarter of the way down the page the goblin says “you, like many wizards like the physical endurance…”. I think it should be “LACK the physical enduranceGreat story though and i fully understand how hard it is to do something this long without a few errors

Interesting story. Thanks for sharing.

There are some major plot problems/contradictions, still an interesting story.

Outside the errors for plot, does Harry's phoenix form have nothing special to it? He cries a lot (nothing wrong with that!), does his form not have the phoenix healing tears? We already know he can't use phoenix fire as he didn't use that to go to Hermione (Fawkes can go anywhere including through a Fidelius as shown earlier).

So what happened to Phoenixs being able to fire to anyone, anywhere?

Nice change in Hermione's animagus from the usual cat. Actually the the so far are nicely different. While I like Hermione's escape she shouldn't have been in that situation so easily to begin with.

So far they are all as bunch of fearful idiots. Seriously? No plan for Dumbledore at all? Everything is canon up to end of 5th year. Hermione is such a sub, "I will not be a victim again!" "Oh never mind I will cower to Snape and let Dumbledore isolate me in the office with no plan."

LOL Harry has feelings

I know this story is long, abandoned, but it drives me absolutely nuts when authors write about things that they don't bother looking up, actually understand, and is just based on some random cartoons that they saw before in their childhood Ninety percent of this chapter with filler that did not progress the story whatsoever.

Then there's the whole Winky, running back and forth, did she forgets how to use her magic?

Was hoping Gryffindors Sword would be his