|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spiritual Heirs|
| mckertis chapter 35 . 6/18
Writing is pretty primitive, but i guess it will do for a level of a school play.
| Golden Light 001 chapter 1 . 6/17
Take in your fanbases' ideas but be sure not to cater to each and every one.
| Guest chapter 35 . 6/16
WEAK! TOO MUCH DRAMA!
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/16
Better change titles from harry potter to hermione granger. Why do people still making fanfiction entitled harry potter but harry in their story is like a wimp compare to other character. Ugh...
| Scarlet Lupin chapter 35 . 5/27
Ahhhhhh thank u this is awesome I love this story soooo much it's an amazing read and I hope there will be a sequel keep up the incredible work
| vgriffin4 chapter 35 . 5/19
THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY. I LOVE READING STORIES THAT KEEP ME RIVETED TO EACH AND EVERY CHAPTER. I LOVE AN AUTHOR WHO CAN TAKE THEIR CHARACTERS AND BRING THEM TO LIFE. TO WHERE I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. JUST LIKE YOUR STARTING OF THE WAR, YOU KNEW SOMEONE WOULD DIE AND YOU BROUGHT ALL THE CHARACTERS TO A POINT THAT YOU REALLY DIDN'T KNOW WHO WOULD DIE. YOU REALLY HAVE AN AMAZING TALENT AS A WRITER. YOU GIVE LIFE TO BOTH YOUR STORY AND THE CHARACTERS. I HOPE THAT YOU WILL SOON COME BACK AND FINISH YOUR WORK. OR IF YOU HAVE FINISHED ON ANOTHER SITE PLEASE LET ME KNOW OR IF YOU HAVE ALLOWED A STORY TO BE ADOPTED. I ANXIOUSLY LOOK FORWARD TO AN UPDATE BUT I AM A PATIENT FAN, I HAVE BEEN KNOWN TO WAIT AS LONG AS IT TAKES. I HAVE READ AND RE-READ PEOPLE'S WORK JUST BECAUSE IT WAS GOOD AND I LIKED IT. WHETHER IT WAS FINISHED OR NOT. THANK YOU FOR THE HOURS AND DAYS OF AMAZING ENTERTAINMENT. VICKY
PLEASE DON'T BE UPSET BY THE CAPS. IT SO I CAN SEE WHAT I WRITE.
| shivram970 chapter 1 . 5/15
A very nice begining
| TheSilverViolet chapter 1 . 5/8
You used the name "Harry" 140 times in this chapter. Good start, but to make it flow better you might want to go back and edit that later
| clumsydolphin chapter 16 . 5/3
Wow! Like I said addicted!
| clumsydolphin chapter 13 . 5/3
I am totally addicted to this story!
| clumsydolphin chapter 12 . 5/3
I know the story is long over and I can't win but ooh I wanna play anyways! I think Hermione will be the slithering gifted
| Silent angel chapter 23 . 4/30
I approve of you using different and interesting creatures for the familiars, but why does everyone everyone immediately recognize a pine martin? They aren'the exactly a common animal that most people know about. Heck, I have no idea what one is related to even.
| wispshifter chapter 21 . 4/16
| IIEarlGreyII chapter 35 . 4/13
I hate a story that is lifted as complete but actually stops Midway through. I wish I hadn't read it.
| IIEarlGreyII chapter 4 . 4/13
That weapon, really? I am starting to lose faith in this...luckily it is still written incredibly well.