Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spiritual Heirs
Elbozo chapter 4 . 9/28
Samurai swords have a square guard and unusually long hilts
Elbozo chapter 3 . 9/28
Elbozo chapter 2 . 9/28
20000 WPM chapter 1 . 9/6
I like your idea for familiar eggs and love that it helps Harry know his true friends. I think they will go to Hermione, Neville and Luna. Not sure what they will be. Something smart for Hermione, something Loyal and Brave for Neville and something ethereal and beautiful for Luna.
1Guest1 chapter 35 . 8/27
Good job.

Pity about the weaselettes machinations, fumblemores ineptness and Rufus's audacity.
1Guest1 chapter 24 . 8/27

I hope harry guts the goat fucker
Toolazytologin chapter 12 . 8/26
About fekking time they realised their feelings for each other
1Guest1 chapter 11 . 8/26

The operation to remove my foot from my mouth was successful.

I shall attempt to explain myself.

I've read far too many happy/fluffy hhr fics both here and on ao3, where the author does a fantastic job of explaining, or describing the evolution of their relationship or they have a fantastic summer and then they go back to either school, grimmauld or the burrow and inevitably hermione gets mind whammied with spells/potions/compulsion charmed jewellery etc and harry has fight the antagonist (usually Ron, Ginny, Howler... err.. Molly, or grumblemore).

This usually detracts from the story as there's fuck all point to it. I'm relieved that she was 'only' charmed and that it failed and she 'only' feels tired/drained. I'm dreading what we will find out what else the old meddling goat fucker has done.
1Guest1 chapter 11 . 8/26
I swear to all and sundry that if fumblemore bloody well potions, spells, compels through other means or something equally fucked up I'm gonna be mightily pissed off.

Yeah I know, "oh look, a reader who's having a temper tantrum"

I do not do angst, and ferfucksake Hermione's gone through enough hell over the summer without going through more..

I made the mistake of reading through some of the comments before reading this fic, and I did see something about a kidnapping; if there is I have my fingers crossed that the retribution will be swift and violent.
Molenir chapter 9 . 8/26
Why is this story not called, Harry Potter and the All Powerful Goblins?
Gwendolyn Paige chapter 30 . 8/18
How come only nevill and Harry have received their training I thought that Hermione had to be trained by the real elves and Luna had to be trained by the fairies how come that hasn’t happened? How will they fulfill the prophecy without their training? I’m on the edge of my seat.
Gear master chapter 7 . 7/17
The goblins are giving too much help
Andrew234 chapter 15 . 7/8
harry potter with the shitty gift empathy the other can resist mind control and talk to dragon's but harry can listen to your problems
Andrew234 chapter 8 . 7/7
he got sure a cooler familiar
Andrew234 chapter 7 . 7/7
wow why would Harry's familiar be a part of the weasel family sure it's adorable but cmon he has very little tactical advantage and even for their size I mean they might be predators but they are the very bottom of the food chain predator wise
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