Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spiritual Heirs
tammgrogan chapter 26 . 7h
Hello, I am rereading your wonderful story, and I just finished with this chapter. I fouls help but laugh, you must have ESP, naming Hermione Beauty. We went to see Beauty and the Beast this past weekend.
jchangpa chapter 35 . 3/20
Well, sorry to tell you this, the end is really bad. Not that the story was all that good but this really nail the coffin.
flowerchild33 chapter 5 . 3/19
OMG! You killed the Grangers and Crookshanks. I have to stop now. Will have to think about continuing.
Frankie4017 chapter 35 . 3/18
3rd best story i have ever read... i love the story but i wont read the sequal till its done then ill most likely read the whole thing again hehe anyway i would like to say that i managed to imagine almost every detail there was in the story and i loved how you made dumbledore somewhat a villian and the way you handled the characters was rather good and to be honest with the ginny kissing harry scene? i though it would of been more badass with harry yelling at her after either pushing or punching her off but then again... somewhat violent and stuff along with it would most likely cause harry to be seen as a "bad" person but oh well hehe anyway have a great day and thank got Willowsong and Robin got to stay with harry hehe
Frankie4017 chapter 34 . 3/18
you know when you try so hard not to cry and all you feel is your eyes stinging slightly at the feel of tears forming in your eyes? thats what i just had... this is so saddening but i still love the story but i slightly dont like you for making an amazing character and killing kim (hopefully people will see this as a joking manner) although seen that im reading this for the first time and havent even peeked into the next chapter... im kinda hoping that robin and wollowsong stay with harry and thats about it... bye
Frankie4017 chapter 4 . 3/15
i look forward to reading this story after i get more time and i like how you have created the story and the components and ive never seen anyone make a story like you have and i like how your building harrys physical stuff up with training and that kind of stuff and i am pretty sure im going to enjoy the story the further i get into it and yeah i just love the story and thats about it? i think? oh well i dont really know what im saying anyway but have a good day and i hope to see a sequel or something to this story and this is my first time reading so please dont spoil anything for me and yeah bye
Guest chapter 28 . 3/1
The room of requirement doesn't show up on the marauders map
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 35 . 2/27
I enjoyed this story, but I'm disappointed that even with the great length of the story it was still not long enough to do in Voldemort and Dumbledore, AND the sequel is INCOMPLETE. That is highly disappointing.
Guest chapter 35 . 2/21
This chapter is the one thing I absolutely hate about this story. The fact that you have Hermione suddenly flying off the handle and doubting Harry after everything they've been through really pisses me off. And Harry appearing apologetic about it? F- that. If Hermione has to be mad at anyone, it should be Ginny, and if I were Harry I'd be pretty pissed at Hermione, not be all surprised and hopeful that Hermione still wants to marry me.
KitkatMoon chapter 35 . 1/26
Awesome Story
NotAMugwump chapter 10 . 12/11/2016
Okay... err, I'll stop reading now
NotAMugwump chapter 6 . 12/11/2016
Judging by the gems, Harry represents Slytherin and Hermione depicts Gryffindor? Hmmm.
Gojin1990 chapter 35 . 12/8/2016
when you make/or if you have already made the sequel can you reply to this with the title of it? thanks a bunch :D
Gojin1990 chapter 33 . 12/8/2016
damn you ... *sob* damn you ... I knew you were gonna snuff poor goldenglaze :C he is an OC so you could kill him off without killing off "main" characters :C if your story wasn't so damn good I dunno if I could keep reading after this :C
Gojin1990 chapter 8 . 12/8/2016
XD an animal that is 100% loyal to pack makes total sense for neville XD considering if i didn't make a mistake in my guess that neville is the hufflepuff spiritual heir. harry is the gryffindor and hermione is the slytherine. making luna my guess for ravenclaw :D
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