Reviews for Dear L
Blues-harp Babysplit chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
That was beautiful! Great story
Amara777 chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
*giggles* Matt as Super Dad-I love it. And I love this well as Dear Mello. Dear Mello was hot, since you had that one sex scene w/ seme Matt, but Dear L was an ocean of humor (the faints were awesome).
VampireDoll666 chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
Aw, I sad that it ended, but I really loved this story.*smiles* Is there going to be a sequel?
Passionate Heart chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
...nice A/N at the end! lol. :) loved the little wedding ceremony! lol... hahaha! :) well, i didn't actually read the chapter yet, i was interested in the Author's note... and couldn't resist to read them first before the actual story! :) lol. but from what i already was fantastic! loved how mr. yagami found out! lol... very cool! :)

and i still love the ending! that is so awesome and funny! great job! :) lol. you have a gift with your writing and you write with such descriptions that i've never seen before in writing! :) great job and FINISH ALL ONE SHOTS! that's the new deal! :) lol. kapeesh? (misspelled...i know! lol)
Kyoko Keehl chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
i love this chapter!

and i hate how long it toke me to read (damn you fucking mother)

but it was an awesome chapter and i cant wait til lthe enxt one! keep up the awesome work!
shions chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Aww, Mello is so awesome! I don't really like the LxLight pairing, but I love the story!
ToNightIamgone chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
This is so sweet, it makes my teeth hurt:)!(No, bad pickup lines aside, i adore it! It stole my heart away:)! I absolutely fell for it:)! This made me so happy to read:)).)

OMG, It was really funny too:). I just loved it.

And L is Lolipop Lane. Now i Know XD...

L started to cry! Swet! And Light will tell his perfect family? Oh noes! O.O His dad's probably a homophobe...Poor Watari XD. Mello and Matt, well they are just always hilariousXD. And such a wonderful couple. Also, I really loved the part where L tried to make Watari understand that he was pregnant... and the poor man actually fainted. Be nice to the elders!XD

I think you and these characters are made for eachother!:))

And I also want to marry this fic.

I should go to sleep now.

Dex Incognito Jerkon chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Hey, that's a nice start to an interesting idea. I just wonder how L&Light r gonna fool the latter's parents or how they'r deemed to react.

Good job. Wait for your update.
VampireDoll666 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I love this, and can't wait for the next chappie. L is just too damn kawaii when he's pregnant!*smiles*
Sashocirrione chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
This is really silly with everyone freaking out and other things being said so calmly.

I especially liked this line:

"If they weren’t having steamy pornography-worthy sex, then they were bickering and getting into fist-fights."

That's so like L and Light.
cityscapes101 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
WOW! Awesome! Your writing is amazing! I won't be surprised to see your name on a book one day! Good job! Please put the next chap up soon!

I love the story line! It's a bit different than the others.
ZoneRobotnik chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Scary Watari. XD

Wow, a baby! Fun!
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