Reviews for I Cannot See the Ocean for the Waves
Daidy chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
hey Ele!
when i read the book, a year ago, i cryed much more than i though possible. i fell in love with the story, Mary and the ocean.
and now that i read your point of you, now that i heard Travis' voice through your words, i fell in love one more time...
thank you for sharing this.
Aphrodite-Venus-u.k chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Very well written! It made me feel like I was reading the book again. I was so sad when Travis died, just so, so sad!
malissa chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
this made me cry. i loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I am extremely impressed by this. You portray Travis so perfectly. Bravo, I loved it.
Lou-Hazza chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I really liked how you gave Travis a voice I probably never would have thought of that but I love the hard work that would have taken me days but anyway I really liked it wonderful writing and Yada Yada yada
ImpossibleSenseinNonsense chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
This was really good, it definitely seems like what Travis would be thinking!
offerjupiter chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
That was so fantastic and so painful all at once, wow can I just cry now ugh Travis whhhhy. I liked it a lot and it was written so wonderfully and there was so much emotion oh jeez wow I loved it thank you for writing it.
DELETE THIS ACCOUNT A-HOLES chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
You. Are. Awesome.

Of all the stories revolving around Carrie Ryan's books, yours is by far the best. I love how you described everything; the analogies were perfect. I think you're the only one who has depicted things through Travis's eyes; I don't think anyone has done better. Scratch that; I don't think anybody CAN do better. I lover Carrie Ryan's books, and you just glorified how wonderful and terrible they are. Thanks again; you did a fantastic job. (I know I sound like a suck up, but it's hard to not be one!)
Light of Night chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Gosh, I almost never review because mine always sound stupid, but I had to for this! I mean I didn't even cry for the real book and this had me all teary. Please continue writing! *Ready to beg on my knees if I have to*
Adria Zoi Parzifal chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Sooo...on my other account I reviewed this but I just don't think it's enough...I love this. I love Travis, I love Mary, I am starting to love to ocean(it scares me). But this beautifully written piece of prose was...amazing. Sounded just like Carrie Ryan. Good job )
DreamXToXxxX DieX chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Poor Travis :(

I love this story, the emotion, and the wording. Great job :)
LoopyLuna13 chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Thanks, your making me cry on Cheistmas and ruin my makeup. I read this book last year and thought Id never cry that much again, but I here practically sobbing my heart out. So pretty and well written and thankyou for lending Travis your voice. Guess I better go redo my makeup,

With love,


Ps I forgot to login
eristwhile chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
keep going!You ought to have a chapter for travis seeing Mary in a few glimpses from where he is. Like when she goes into the forest, when they trudge through the paths after he's dead, when Jed saves her and dies, and when she is finally in the ocean!...That would be soooo awesome!
blabla chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I love the way you portray Travis's thoughts like this.. Your story is the nicest story in the fanfiction archive for the forest of hands and teeth.. I hope you can write a story of Mary and Travis with a happy ending. I'm sure many people will like that too..:) good luck!
daziyly chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This was an excellent one-shot, and I think you perfectly protrayed what I thought travis would have been going through at this time. Good job.
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