Reviews for Halloweentown 5
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Everyone gathered at a place named" The guidance in magic" where no evil can dwell. Witnessing in the ball that reveals the family was appalled at the disgracing events taking place in kalbar town. Quickly becoming overwhelmed with doubt Aggie begins telling of the guidance in magic.
Ogamy chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Everyone gathers to a place named Alluoa where no evil can enter. The Family witnesses Kalbar town through the ball of vision and were appalled at the sinister unpleasant events occurring there. Aggie Begins telling everyone about the history of Alluoa.
selena gomez chapter 2 . 6/25/2014
marine meets kalbar at her brothers work but dillon says that he is good grandma aggie finds something suspicious and kalbar makes halloweentown into kalbar sophie and marine helped grandma aggie to put kalbar to jail
Sarah Cullen chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Awesome! Dude that was amazing! Gosh i wish you would write more!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
where can you watch the movieee
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
They should make a movie. It would be good.
mickie123 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
when is this movie coming out?
marnie chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
poorly written
Jason Isaacs fangirl Rickmania chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
really confusing

you need to have paragraph breaks, and the proper punctuation. I couldn't tell when something was being said, when one sentence ended, or where another one began.

It's a good story, but it was hard to follow because there was no paragraph structure
FightingDreamer23 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
alright i'm going to try to help you out here. Basically what i'm reading is just a summary of the story. But where's the detail? you have no beginning middle or end. Where's the climax of this story? I love halloweentown and thought i could help another author out. What you should do is have each character for chapter explaining there new life in halloweentown is going. How everyone is doing. Since dylan has kept contact with his family i suggest having some of the characters talk about how they feel about dylan's job and so on and so forth. Hope i could help.
FightingDreamer23
hoodie61 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
oh its very good u have 2 see movie