Reviews for The Hummer
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Now that was sertiously hot, very nicely written! But also rather disturbing as well, you are hinting by your own words that bella didn't really have a choice in this, and Edward, Alice Esme and Carlisle knew but didn't tell her? N ow shouldn't she have some say as who she gives her body to? Maybe this should have a "dubious Consent" warning on it! And SHE feels guilty? What is that?
Gemgem020507 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
FUCK ME! Yes! That is all I have to say...

CelticGlamazon chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Yummm dilf /faint
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
wow hot stuff. I want a Carlisle. LOL.
SussexBelle chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I love the fact that this is a plausible story, not the "oops I fell on your cock" kind of "porn" storyline...this makes sense! Really well written and I LOVED it! Will go check out your other stories now
sadtomato chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
OK that was fuck hot. Damn. I'm gonna need a minute. *panting*

I love what you did with Carlisle. He was still caring and sweet and Carlisle-ish but totally filthy too. Very nice.

I found this via the McYummy Treasure Chest C2.
angel04une chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
mmmmm yummy!
GLee68 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
*fans self*

O M C!

Growling, purring, humming Carlisle...

(sorry had to rush off and take a cold shower)

Dirty talking desperate Carlisle...

(changes undies again)

I think this is the hawtest thing I've read in ages!

(has a little lie down to cope with the intensity...)

Well done!
sucked in 82 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
girl that was delish! very sexy!
ronni2729 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
fucking amazing 33
Just4ALE chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Hi there! This was an interesting and surprising turn of events - it had to happen.

Since her human memories fade, will this one fade when she's vamp? Hm.

Nicely done. Thx.

IsabellaVolturiWhitlock chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
ZOMG fucking ahmazing honestly that's one of the hottest and well written things I've ever had the wonderful privlage of reading on this site. You have one hell of a way with words!
JessicaBrightstar chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
ohhhmahgahhh, WOW .

this is, to be quite blunt,


...this is the stuff that [smut and otherwise] writers try to create in their works, and i fully believe that you are one of, if not THE, best smut writer i have ever seen. it's...breathtaking.

i was wondering though. . .why did you have Carlisle and Bella get together(quite passionately, not that i have to mention it :P), and then have her still be with edward?

oh, and P.S., you better shoot SweetT129 a thank-you message, because if it wasnt for this author's note ( www . fanfiction s/5103782/34/Basking_in_the_Light_of_our_Love)(you have to put it together and erase the spaces that i added to use the link), i never would have even looked this up, and thus, never would have ever read this.

like i said, love.

LadyGrelka chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Dear fucking god that was HOT! I think I need a cold shower now. And hell I would say fuck Edward and fight to keep Carlisle because he is just fucking hot.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
That is great! :)
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