Reviews for The Hummer
shar0525 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Wow. Hot. Didn't expect that ending!
caressa28 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Damn! Carlisle was on fire! Thanks for posting.
FMHC chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Love this! Not too much emo and a neatly made frame story to tie it all togeather. And such a sweet lemon )
ShaunaBelle chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
This was just flat out HOT!
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
love it keep writting
readingmama chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Holy hell, that was fantastic!

"Oh, yes, my dear, I am going to make you fucking buckle and cry out my name,"

I may have had to take a few breaths of my own after that line.

Great job!
WildChild95 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Really enjoyed it! Good jOb :)
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Now that was sertiously hot, very nicely written! But also rather disturbing as well, you are hinting by your own words that bella didn't really have a choice in this, and Edward, Alice Esme and Carlisle knew but didn't tell her? N ow shouldn't she have some say as who she gives her body to? Maybe this should have a "dubious Consent" warning on it! And SHE feels guilty? What is that?
Gemgem020507 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
FUCK ME! Yes! That is all I have to say...

*pants*
CelticGlamazon chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Yummm dilf /faint
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
wow hot stuff. I want a Carlisle. LOL.
SussexBelle chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I love the fact that this is a plausible story, not the "oops I fell on your cock" kind of "porn" storyline...this makes sense! Really well written and I LOVED it! Will go check out your other stories now
sadtomato chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
OK that was fuck hot. Damn. I'm gonna need a minute. *panting*

I love what you did with Carlisle. He was still caring and sweet and Carlisle-ish but totally filthy too. Very nice.

I found this via the McYummy Treasure Chest C2.
angel04une chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
mmmmm yummy!
GLee68 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
*fans self*

O M C!

Growling, purring, humming Carlisle...

(sorry had to rush off and take a cold shower)

Dirty talking desperate Carlisle...

(changes undies again)

I think this is the hawtest thing I've read in ages!

(has a little lie down to cope with the intensity...)

Well done!
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