Reviews for The Hummer
addictedtotwilight79 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Holy hotter then hell shit. Damn. Oh my god. Um...yeah. I followed the link on PPSS. Amazing. I was wondering how it would all work out and then you made it happen. That was one of the hottest sex scenes I have EVER read. Wow. Ok need to go regulate my breathing and pimp out your story.

ash902 chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I so voted for you...yours was one of the few submissions that actually met my criteria for DILF. I mean anyone who's a dad can be a DILF, but for me it has to be someone you know's father (i.e. friend's dad, babysitting charge's dad, etc.) and it should be fairly taboo to even think of hooking up. Plus I think it was the only vamp submission, so that deserves major props.

What I loved about yours is that it was a vampfic that pretty much went along with canon. I really like that you played the singer card and used Alice's talents to make everything okay. Plus you could feel Bella's anguish over her feelings before, during, and after.

Good luck in the comp!
TwilightMundi chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Hm, interesting story. And hot, hot lemon!
xXxlizardxXx chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
wow! that was very good! well done!


M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
That was sexy.
acw1 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
loved it.
rameau chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I'm speechless.
Tabbycat917 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I loved it!
booboo.kitty2.0 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Great job sweets and good luck in the contest!

sonyabrady1971 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
holy shit! the was fuckawesome! he is definitely a DILF and I would do him in a heartbeat..that couldn't have been any better if you tried...
Kathy Hiester chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
great story
coxie chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Interesting concept, definitely different. I enjoyed this quite a bit. The letter from Alice at the end made me tear up and Edward too.

The only thing I found weird was the fact that Carlisle kept calling her "woman". I would have preferred he just yell out "Bella", than "woman" while they were having sex. But anyway, that's just me.

Other than that I found this hot and sexy and different. )
Walker77 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
wow, ok as i was reading this i was so mad that you would have them do that and i almost stopped reading but then you explained and i am glad i finished the story, it was well done. sorry about sending out the negative vibes lol
edmom chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
DAMN DILF thank you
SweetT129 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
OMFG that was so fucking hot. I think I just lost my shit too. And it was all, every bit, to do with Carlisle's words. Bella is definitely not the only one in need of clean panties right now, that's for damn sure. Holy hell woman. Thank you.
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