I enjoyed your first attempt at writing! It was so cute having Gooshie there!

Loved the Interface line. Is Al charming or what!

So glad she took a stand against that idiot and got out alive! He deserved longer than 5 years.. sometimes I wish they'd throw away the key when it came to people like that!

Short - but sweet!

I really enjoyed this story. Well deserving of it's 8th Place in the competition.

As soon as the halitosis was mentioned, I realized it was Gooshie, but then my memory isn't quite as Swiss cheesed as Sam's. {Though at times it comes close!}

That said, it didn't spoil the story at all for me that I worked it out.

There are a couple of - very minor - 'technical' errors, easily made, easily cured by having a beta reader. Something I learned the hard way.

I loved the 'interface' line!

I'm looking forward to more from this author.

Brava!