|Reviews for Pretender|
| Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Very good. Song fits story well.
| Commander Zia chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
that was SO AMAZING! One of the best soft-DA interpretations I've read, and I absolutely adored the in-and-out of the past/present thing going on. I also love the song ;) *faves* Thanks for writing such great stuff :)
| SunflowerIce chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
wow that was intense.. youre a very good writer..mixing the past and present of dark ace.. really great, how you worked it out..
| Bergie chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
That ending... dude... It was scary, and disturbing, and yet so awesomely amazing :D
| The High Demon Lord chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
I truly like how you switched back and forth between the past and present until they melded.
| Pascy chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
That was really cool! It wasn't confusing at all knew exactly was happening. I've never heard of Dark Ace betraying the Storm Hawks because the Sky Council was corrupt. Love how Dark Ace is flitting through two times it made it really interesting! Also cool song to choose it fit very well with the story. Absolutely loved it!
| I Hate You When You Breathe chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
i love te song and the song fic was awesome! yeupperz! you rock!