this is really good! i love it! update soon!

I love it! Max seems like a cool vampire, why couldnt she use the mind powers to figure out wat they wer doing that day? i like how trey sounds he sounds sexy lol continue please

I like this story, :)

nice. i see some romance in the works. update soon

-luna

I liked your story, very discriptive and it held my interest!I'm new to the world of fanfiction and i just posted my first story today so when the public can read it,please read and review!

I'd really like to see where this story is heading, any chance you could write another chapter?

ok "mistone123"(lol i put tht cause i really knw u)i luv the story its really though u have to others to work on!lol,other then tht this is realy good!so keep it up.n to the 1st 3 me slapping u on the hand n saying bad "mistone".u will not end up lyk .

i luv ya.n miss u!

ok im commenting :D hahaha

i loved it i agree with the others, please continue!

Heyya

I love that first chapter and I love the character of Max

Whatever or However yu are writing carry on because its amazing and I cant wait for the nxt chapter

Love Blaise xx

pretty good. i am quite interested to see where this goes. update soon!

-luna