Great story so far; I only have one thing to point out. GoF is my favorite book out the series, and Hogwarts students only start learning Summoning and Banishing Charms in their fourth year, as is indicated by the books. Now, if this is a part of the AU bit of the story, then I'm sorry if i sounded a bit accusing (did i? I'm not entirely sure...). However, I thought you should know. By the way, this story has officially made it too my fav list!

I don't think I've ever had that nice of a neighbor...

I like this story, where is the promised sequel? *begging eyes*

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

I love this story

Really slash? just doesnt work Jack is sounding like a pedophile

Amazing story !

loved it , harry is really right , is like the WW is masochist , they need someone bad , someone that want to kill them , like is they drug , they need it , ...

I have to admit when I thought of Harry Potter crossovers Stargate wasn't on my list but this was a wonderful story. I loved Harry with Jack, they go together well, just the right amount of damaged for eachother to handle. Great story.

Hi! I have always loved your stries! I was wondering what happened to all my favs? Mainly the Enchantment Series. I was very distressed to find them missing! If I could at least have a copy of my favs then I would be happy! Thanks!

Very good story .. think this is the second time I have read it .. lol

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Hi,
I'm sorry for writing to you this way, but I didn't know another way, since I couldn't send you a PM (I'm also sorry for my english by the way). I just wanted to ask why you deleted some of your stories (the enchantment series). At least I guess you deleted them, since I can't find them anymore. I really loved Ink stained love, it was amazingly written!

just finished reading this story it was great now off to read your squeal.

I'm enjoying this story a lot. Your Harry is very likeable and plausible and he's great with Jack. Teddy's such a doll too.
But... one peeve that kind of stopped me in my tracks. "There has been no precedent for any human using more than about 14 percent of their brain function… " This is a myth. People may use only a relatively small part of their brain at any given moment but in the course of a single day they use the majority of the brain. That's very even small brain injuries cause big problems. Check it out in or wikipedia etc.
Sorry for the lecture. But I hate when misinformation gets repeated over and over to the point that even intelligent, educated people accept it as the truth.
Now back to your excellent story...

Hello! This is actually Betsanne, using my account that I set up for stories only...lol...I'm glad to hear that I motivated you to write this crossover. So far, I am loving it and will be reading the rest of it. Personally, I don't think there is enough Jack/Harry pairings. And some day, I hope to finish Dual World, both the gen and slash version.

Keep up the good work!