Reviews for Escape
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
HOLY FREAKING SMOKES!
HOLY FREAKING SMOKES AND TONS OF BACON!
HOLY
OH
MY
GOD.
JESUS.
CHRIST.
I can feeling
The amazing emotion
Of this story is throwing
Me over the boat and into the
Water of a brilliantly colored sea
And I can't bring myself out of it, it's so beautiful.
Holly chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
That was beautiful!

Everyline flowed really well.

The only bit I didn't like was, when you repeated whispers twice in the first paragraph?

You annoyingly good writer.

:)

x
YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Umm...

Just...

Good...

Good, in the way that you say 'good' because it's simplistic as something more complex would ruin what you menat by it was 'good'.

Because it was good.

If you know what I mean...
SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Now, now. I could totally see that happening in season 7's 4th ep. :) Ziva breaking down in tony's arms. that was a good little oneshot:)
Swingflip chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
really good! well written. just confusing? hah
Ab55556 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
OHMYGOD!

You need to find out something that happened, but hey, even if you didn't it was still incredible.

I don't know how you do that, write it so no one has a clue what it means, but then make it mind-blowing at the same time!

It was clever though, how you left it to us to decide :P

I thought she was giving birth or something at first, then I realised that I was being stupid!

Wow.

Yeah.

Um.

Wow.

I hate you :P

I love you.

You're mean.

You're amazing.

I hate you.

HOW THE HELL CAN YOU DO THIS?

Its not fair! (I sound like Lily Allen, but I don't care :P)

I love the part about emotions running through Tony's head at a thousand miles per hour. But screw me, I loved the whole thing.

So jealous right now!

You know what I'm gonna do, read this again. And again.

The perhaps another time, I'll read it again.

And then again after that.

Wwo.

I love you.

x
OzBabe chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Wow. That was so ... sad!

Absolutly amazing writing though, very sad.

Mx
OutCold chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Jesus. I'm not crying, I'm not . . .

Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow.

:o

Wow, wow, wow.

Wow.

Um, pretty speechless right now.

Thanks for the dedication.

Um. Wow. Um.

I love this so much. Wow.

So, um, yeah. Wow.

xx
Shadowhunter536 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
what was this about? why was Ziva so emotionally distraught? other than not having the back ground or any info of the why/what it was well written
moonfaerie326 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
But what if I have no imagination, how will I imagine what has happened then? :P

LOL.

It was really good, I'm going to emphasize the really, because it needs it. You are amazing; and I am sorry that you've had a bad week. [HUGS]

ILY
CheerChickx chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Wow.

This was so passionate.

The word choice was perfect.

It was written incredibly well!

Wow..

I'm still in shock.

That was amazing.

How can you write that well?

Yeaah. I was kinda confused to what was happening. I thought for a second that there had been a first chapter or something that I hadnt read! But it's good that we can decide ourselves what was happening.

Love you! x