|Reviews for Behind Closed Hearts|
| linh chapter 12 . 8/13/2013
Write new chapter soon. I like your story. I like the way that Aphrodite do he love me, he love me not text. It very funny. I bet Ares will very happy to hear about it.
| Mandy chapter 12 . 7/19/2013
Why last chapter! I loved this story
| Kas221 chapter 5 . 3/28/2013
:( naw , I hate how everyone is so mean to Heph
| JustMeandAlwaysWillBe chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
You so have to do more now I mean it.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/14/2013
Please write more
| R. Jack Garret chapter 12 . 12/10/2012
It's sad that you aren't going to finish this. Its a wonderful story, wonderful plot, wonderful grammar. Why must all beautiful things come to an end?
Well, I guess there's nothing I can do, I hope you'll still have a passion for writing, you are just truly amazing. :)
| BeautyGirl03 chapter 11 . 10/20/2012
I am. Complete idiocy.
| BeautyGirl03 chapter 6 . 10/20/2012
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/10/2012
Sorry, got cut off. She borrows her mOthers necklace then breaks it and he makes a replacement. Just saying. Keep it up. Post soon. Also she should get pregnant on the wedding night.
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/10/2012
This is a great story. I look forward to seeing when she starts having babies. Eros, and Anteros are interesting, but annoying. I personally think that Hephy started becoming more of the baby-sitter after the first couple, Eros and Anteros were born. But I definitely think he was the more prominent for Harmonia, Deimos and Phobos. They were born in that order. This, meaning all previos sentences, would make an interesting chapter I think. Like, Deimos and Phobos got made Ares' goons for causing trouble, or maintaining his chariot. like, for example, D & P are out joyriding, they break something, and Hephaestus helps them fix it. Or Harmonia borrows her m
| Raiden chapter 12 . 11/23/2011
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
OY OY OY
Also can you update your story in the Percy Jackson community
| ElPotato101 chapter 12 . 10/15/2011
Update update plz
| addine995 chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
I'm a Greek, and usually, I'm not very fond of others using our mythology, but that one was really good :)
I only have some things I want to tell you about your dialogues:
-The ancient Greeks used to talk a lot, and usually talk using many adjectives and adverbs. This way, they were showing their exact emotions. Also,
-They don't "shorten" names. They would never say "Heph". They always said: Hephaestus.
And something you should know:
-Hephaestus forced Hera to allow him to marry Aphrodite by trapping her in a throne he made. Everytime Hera would sit down, invissible chains would hold her wrists tight. That way Hera gave her permission to Hephaestus to marry Aphrodite.
-Ares and Aphrodite started a relationship after she had married Hephaestus. She got married shortly after she got to Olympus. She met Ares the day of her wedding. Something more:
-Zeus doesn't give Hera that much power. He used to threat her by beating.
Anyway, I appreciate your work and the research you've done. I just wanted to share with you the things I already know. So far, so good! :)
| Carrington Sinclair chapter 12 . 10/5/2010
I relay like your story your doing a great job..
Please write more soon (as in right this very second)
| softnerd chapter 12 . 9/19/2010
hey can you add eros into this? like aphrodite having ares's son? pleaaaassssseeee i'll be your best friend!