|Reviews for Rhapsody in B|
| NikkiBU chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
Aww, the Chief's appreciative gesture to Edward made me tear up. So good. Still liking it!
| sshg316 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
Oh wow. This was beautifully written. I cried when he started to sing the song - and that choice of song was just brilliant.
As a gal who graduated high school in 1990, the references made me smile. :)
Looking forward to more!
| hearyoumee chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
I really love this so far. I can't wait to see where it goes!
| torsstupidmouth chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
I've read this chapter a handful of times since you sent it to me earlier, and the part where Charlie is crying still makes me tear up every time I read it.
I love you. 3
| Minerva.May.I chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
This was too, too adorable and it made me cry. So good.
| littlesecret84 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
What a wonderful first chapter. I laughed and cried a little bit too. Can't wait for more.
| daisy3853 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
"Even though it felt all wrong, I was getting used to her empty chair at the dinner table, and the way my dad looked so sad all the time. But it was days like today, when we had to keep living and doing things that were special to her, that were the hardest." UGH. *emo* that was really heartbreaking.
"kicked out the chair next to me, hoping that would make it look like a friend had been sitting there so people wouldn’t think I was alone" :(
"He just plopped down on the grass and scooched over until his back touched mine. He let me lean on him and cry as he plucked on his guitar and hummed pretty sounds that weren’t quite words, but sounded nice just the same." that's really beautiful. i like him. i love how he talks about her in a happy way with bella... that really is something you need sometimes.
wow. prettier than kelly? that's a compliment if i've ever heard one.
sigh. you really do write good charlies. i'm all teary now after their little exchange.
oh man. and edward playing... dude. "I cried then, but they were happy tears, because for the first time in a really long time, I felt like maybe my mom really was with me again."
and then charlie... and patting edward... and the sort of kiss... and now he's gone... and i'm all sniffly.
i love this story already. you are awesome, and i like it when people make me cry. ;) thank you for writing bb :)
| twilightdragnfly chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
| Ellie-BR chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
This fic is so good! It's chapter #2 and I'm addicted already. Is it possible? LoL
Edward is the cutest boy ever. I wish I had met someone like him when I was fourteen.
I think you'll make me remember a lot of things from my childhood. And I love that...so...Thanks! ;)
I can't wait to read more chapters! See you,then!
| ReDish chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
| jamie1078 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
wow, great chapter! i teared up and was so sad with bella and her pain. But Edward intrigues me and i can't wait for more!
| DragonsExist chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
I liked it...I wish Edward wouldve stayed, and I miss the ghetto slip and slide, brings back memories!
| Ihbtfhoiniougwrdiuuhohyf chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
i want him to grab my boob.
send him to me lisa.
| overzealousbunny chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I love Charlie. I loved him in Intersection when he finally opened up and told Bella all about how he'd never given up on her.. and this just makes me love him even more.
THIS time i'm making sure I click author alert. Not missing out on another chapter bb!
| TabithaAbraham chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Love Charlie! It's so sweet to see his relationship with Renee when it was new and wonderful. Thanks for writing! :D