|Reviews for Rhapsody in B|
| DontQuitYourDayJob chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
This premise is a bit ridiculous, to be quite honest. It seems to me that if this story were to attempt to be even the slightest bit believable, there would be so much development between the relationship of your two main characters that seeing them only once per year would be pointless. My guess is that you'll use the same old tired, drawn-out plot points to keep them apart until the very last second.
I'm assuming, of course, that they actually DO get together, considering that you have a fic that is clearly labeled as an Edward and Bella pairing beginning in Charlie's point of view. What are you going to do? Begin the story when Edward and Bella are children? How absolutely yawn-inducing.
You have three published stories, all of which seem to feature Charlie quite heavily. I would think that you would enjoy writing a character that you at least had some modicum of talent portraying. You continue to paint him as some dim-witted fool who can't tell his ass from a hole in the ground. I suggest you give up on that and try something new with your talents, if there is, in fact, a bit of writing that you are actually talented at.
Needless to say - I won't be reading further.
| dazzled by wizards chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
thats adorable, i love charlie :)
| ohsoindiscreet chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Oh, I think this will be good.
You write a very good Charlie...can't wait to read more!
| DragonsExist chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I already love this Charlie..even though this is his only POV. Him singing My Girl..how sweet!
| Aurabee chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
That's a very promising beginning and I'm definitely looking forward to more!
| kirster226 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Yay. I'm excited about this new story. Great start!
| WriterMegg chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Very good. I really like it can't wait for more.
| rosygloss chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Very nice-I enjoyed the premise of this one, and look forward to seeing where you will take it.
Thank you for writing!
| kay321 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Liking this so far.
| coldplaywhore chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
You have me very intrigued already. Starting out with a Charlie POV from 1975? Shit, even I wasn't born then :) LOL. Looking forward to seeing what you have for us. Are you planning the same update schedule as Intersection? Cause I must admit, I squeal on Wednesday nights when I get your update!
| Groovechild1964 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Nice start. I am pretty sure that this is the firsat time I have ever read a Charlie POV. It was a nice change. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
| LBJoy chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Looking fwd to reading what happens next!
| ScarlettLetters chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I like Charlie POV. The fandom needs more Charlie POV. I did the math in my head...does September of 76 bring about a change for these two?
| oHALEno4 chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
I'm excited to see where this story goes. Great opening chapter. Oh and I came across it from A Different Forest.
| bemily chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Interesting start...poor Renee and Charlie, they rarely get happy moments. So sadly true about small town "traditions" born out of boredom.