|Reviews for Rhapsody in B|
| bride2be chapter 12 . 2/27/2011
I just read this story all in one sitting. I actually had a massage and couldn't focus on relaxing because I was thinking I'd rather be finishing the story to see what happens with our two fave characters. I love the anticipation that you built up for the characters. I also really love how you were able to incorporate popular fads and songs of each year. It was a crack up to relive some of those memories.
| Eyes of Topaz chapter 12 . 2/25/2011
I started this story this morning, stumbling on it through a community rec and have not been able to stop reading it. You had me in tears, I laughed out loud and just absolutely loved it from beginning to end!
Thanks so much for sharing your talents and such a wonderful read!
| Twink423 chapter 12 . 2/24/2011
Yay! Babies for these two. They got their happily ever after an I'm so glad.
This was a great story and had so much emotion and was so well written.
Thank you for sharing it! I really enjoyed it. :D
| Twink423 chapter 11 . 2/23/2011
So glad Bella is finally able to think of things as "ours" and not just edward's.
And him with the twist tie was so sweet!
| Twink423 chapter 10 . 2/23/2011
So great. Wow what a chapter. They both finally admitted how unhappy they were being apart. So glad they can be together all the time now.
And what a beautiful time they had loving each other. I want him so much. Can I have this Edward? ;-D
| cejsmom chapter 12 . 2/23/2011
I really truly loved this. My heart broke a few times but you mended it quite nicely.
| Twink423 chapter 9 . 2/23/2011
Wow! Such an amazing chapter!
So good and had me crying a few times feeling so many emotions with these two.
Edward playing all of her mom's songs for her and thinking about her mom showing him how to take care of her... It's like she knew Edward would be the one to love her baby girl forever. I really hope they can make it work now, even when they won't always be physically together.
And finally they kiss! So great. :-*
| Twink423 chapter 8 . 2/23/2011
I have so much hope for these two. I can tell they both really want things to be different and to be close again. I really want them to do it.
| Twink423 chapter 7 . 2/22/2011
I'm so happy Edward is doing well with the band, but so sad Bella didn't get to see him this new years. :-(
I loves his gifts for her - the calling card is great. And the music is so telling.
And Esme giving her that picture and sweatshirt... So great.
| austenbrontemeyer chapter 4 . 2/22/2011
Four chapters in with less than a handful of tiny errors is no small feat. Your style is clean with a natural and unerringly unbroken flow. Most refreshing are subtle nuances layered and working intelligently within the interplay of action and inner dialog. Nice.
Ever thought about writing teen fiction for release? Lists of grade/age level vocabulary woven within your stories will allow for better acceptance for publishers particularly looking for teen girl fiction which is in high demand at this time.
Thanks for an intelligent and refreshing read thus far.
| Twink423 chapter 6 . 2/22/2011
Sad panda. :-(
To bad he has a girl and even worse that Bella didn't even know about her. I can still tell that Edward loves her, bit he thinks hes doing right for Bella by staying away and keeping her from his musician life. When will he wise up?
| Twink423 chapter 5 . 2/22/2011
Oh god. That almost kiss with Bella and Edward... I wanted it so bad and my heart hurts for then both. Poor Edward wanting to tell her all his feelings. Love him having a picture of her packed in his bag to go to New York with him.
| Twink423 chapter 4 . 2/22/2011
Poor Edward having to see her with mike. I don't blame him for being hurt because she thought he could hurt her.
Glad they were able to make up too and for him to still sing to her.
| Twink423 chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
Wow, what a chapter... so much going on.
Edward really has it bad for her, but is sitting back because of Bella liking Mike and not thinking that Edward would ever see her as more than a sister. She doesn't know how much he wants her.
Too bad he called her dad on her. Pretty sure she won't forgive him anytime soon for doing that. :-(
| Twink423 chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
He is so sweet to know her song with her Mom and to sing it for her.
And the accidental half kiss? Can't wait for more of that if they can decide they're meant to be and all that.