|Reviews for Makai Senki: Tales of War|
| chaos-music chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
Wow, this was really good. I don't really have much words to say - for some reason, it really struck me.
| ElizT chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
First let me say this; English isn't your first language! I didn't notice a single thing wrong, heck I even notice on some other story's though that's probably misspellings and such.
Now let me say how clever it was to be absolutely vague on who the 2 where. I don't think it was Laharl and Flonne or Etna, and I have no idea if Zeta counts, it could be Laharl's parents though.
| Fulgance chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Surprising? Not really.
Characters? Laharl and Flonne, definitely.
Anything else? Yes. English isn't your first language? Well, it isn't mine, either. So what? You write exceptionally well...so either you're just insecure and actually have a high mastery of the English language, or you've got a wonderful beta.
Oh, and...please? DO make this longer. That's the only fault I could find: it's too short! Wah! I wanted the pleasure to last!