Snape and Draco’s POVS are fascinating and in character but aggravating

I feel bad for poor Harry. His dilemma is truly awful experience—I would want to be Snape’s either, he’d be a horrible father.

Heh. Blood of the covenant is thicker than the waters of the womb.

THEY FINALLY KISS!

oh Dumbledore you’re just making Harry be a Sacrificial Lamb!

for someone who knows you’re James’ son but in the end isn’t for sixteen years is hard to accept the fact that you’re not your supposed to be father and being denial is one way to avoid coming to the fact that you actually aren’t, it’s hard.

IM ONCE AGAIN WIDE AGAPE SEVERUS KNOWS!

OH IM FLABBERGASTED THE WAY BELLATRIX’S HEAD EXPLODE PLEASEEEE

oh oh Draco’s already smiling oh Oh

oHhh he’s hiding UR face

I really enjoyed this story. With these kinds of stories it feels like the characters are usually very ooc (which in itself is not wrong, it's fanfic after all, but makes me slightly unconfortable at times) but I feel like you made them really true to character. Especially Harry feels ooc in most fics i've read but you wrote him so nicely. The Voldemort battle was maybe slightly underwhelming in contrast to the buildup, but it was also kind of cool how powerful you made love. All in all this is one of my favourite fanfictions I've read in a long time. Really nicely written, never got boring, and I felt at all times that it was going somewhere and not just running in place or in circles.

Amazing story! Love the unique twist to the “Snape us Harry’s dad” prompt

reread... still a beautiful story!

um dobby was wandless and ministry traced him

I loved it and I just wanted to tell you to not stop writing .