Reviews for Luminescence
Draco Oblivion chapter 3 . 2/16/2017
Hmm, I kinda want a bait and switch in finding out Jason's secretly gay and talks to Bella because he believes she's the only one who wouldn't judge him. It'd be a nice change from the classic jocks are evil or closeted jockbully trend
Hahaha I love how trusting Bella is. I think she's meant to still be quite young?
I never really thought James had a particular hatred for humans, just general apathy when it comes to anything but what he wants. I mean he doesn't really show much regard for other vampires either but I figured the cruelty was merely a part of his passion for the hunt
Draco Oblivion chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
This is an interesting start. I'd point out discrepancies between this and canon Victoria's backstory but it looks like you have your own plans for it. Kinda looking forward to seeing how much this'll change things
Sodapop4me2004 chapter 28 . 2/15/2017
Loved it
jeroengrootendorst chapter 27 . 2/6/2017
another great chapter, i really love youre story til now
jeroengrootendorst chapter 16 . 2/6/2017
good good chapter ,
jeroengrootendorst chapter 15 . 2/6/2017
i liked this chapter, but i really hate edward and i was hoping that he would not be in it, but i will see wat it brings in futere chapters
jeroengrootendorst chapter 14 . 2/6/2017
Great chapter ,
jeroengrootendorst chapter 13 . 2/6/2017
i know i am a bit late with this, but this is the first time i read youre story, and i really liked this chapter, i love it that bella and victoria are getting closer together, im just going to pretent that youre still writing this story , so i hope that edward is not going to be a big deal in tis story

i Am sorry For the bad writing, English is not my own langauge and i dont have had manny lessons in it
FF chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
I keep stumbling across this every time I look for a new read and it makes me stop to think about how amazing this one was. It's been 2 years since I read it and it still is one of my favourites. If I ever decide to reread anything, it'll be this one and Love Bites.
Alkeniw Andilite chapter 28 . 12/3/2016
Oh. My. Hell.
This story is amazing. I love how deep the love Bella and Victoria is, and how it was formed. Thank you so much for creating this beautiful story. Now, it's time for me to read "My Flower, Her Fire" to see how good that might be.
PewterTA99 chapter 28 . 11/1/2016
Absolutely fantastic story and exceptionally well written.
AvidVillain95 chapter 28 . 10/17/2016
This is an amazing story. I wish you would pursue a Bella/Tanya or a Kate/Bella sorry in the future and write one. Your writing is very crisp and precise. And I appreciate the multiple perspective and taking your time with the story. thank you for writing
weepingbirch chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
I feel like I reread this story every few months. It just keeps getting better and better. Thank you for creating such a wonderful story.
Legumea chapter 28 . 9/24/2016
Loved this story! I came by this by accident and so glad I did. I look forward to reading more of your works. Keep writing!
onlytoask chapter 4 . 8/10/2016
Well, that was a bit ham fisted.
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