Reviews for Fault
winterhorses chapter 16 . 12/22/2022
Team Carlisle. Every time, all the time. :-)
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 31 . 3/22/2022
This was very odd but beautiful story. I’m glad you wrote about mental health. Thank you
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 1 . 8/10/2021
U, this doesn't really seem like rape here I mean she gave consent. She even mentions how she gave consent.

It seems like a young girl who had sex with a guy she didn't like too much and then regretted it after.

Why she acting all sad and traumatized like no one forced her or anything.
levityoflonging chapter 26 . 4/23/2021
I wondered if that's what you were hinting at, but I'm still confused. James has interacted with other people. Like when he confronted Edward and Tanya for stealing Bella's table, or when the mean girls said Bella could give him head on the floor of the JC Pennys. Was Bella just yelling about how they took her table in the third person in my first example?
levityoflonging chapter 20 . 4/23/2021
Aspects of your story remind me of "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson, a book I read over and over in high school.
I'm touched that your Edward sacrificed his social rep to be with Bella. That's so significant when you're at that age.
GeekMama Bee chapter 26 . 10/18/2020
What?! I never even suspected!
Makes sense though some of Charlie’s reactions.
Thank you for sharing this.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/27/2020
Your writing makes me sad, author!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/22/2020
It's WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.
Messy Bronze Hair chapter 31 . 6/26/2019
That’s it?! I thought that the ending would explain everything. I felt that everything was so disconnected...

I liked the story because this is probably one of the strangest ones that I have read, but I wish there was more to it!

Thank you for sharing!

Messy Bronze Hair
Pattsy1994 chapter 5 . 5/20/2019
Chicken sh*t, Edward.
Pattsy1994 chapter 3 . 5/19/2019
Backbone, Bella backbone girl.
Pattsy1994 chapter 2 . 5/19/2019
Come on Bella, stand up and be counted, defend yourself.
Pattsy1994 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
Wow, this is deep.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/11/2019
therapy? really?

this is boring as fuck
Guest chapter 8 . 1/11/2019
Any Edward that has been with tanya isn't one I want with bella. PERIOD.
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