I liked something about James sliminess too, and I've never pondered it till now so here we are. This story is so good, and so funny when Im not expecting it. Sitting on Bellas shoulders, watching and wondering what all Edwards hiding from while Tanya feeds him grapes. But James leaves a cold, dreadful feeling on the nape even when he wants to be charming, so fuck the red flags, Bella; here we go! thanks for such a quality read!

I'm back! Just a quick skim of the first two chapters to brace and couchlock me in for the tumultuous ride of this chapter. It's such a gritty, bare telling; loving the hollow tones of Bellas voice until Edward appears, like light. Thank you as always for sharing x

Holy shit dude.

Holy shit

I'm breathless for Edward to save Bella. She's so volatile and aware of it, she's making me sweat, at the edge of my seat with a napkin ready for girl

Okay, I'm locked in.

You're story inspired one of my favorites, and immediately I'm ready to get faulty. I didn't realise I was at the end of the chapter until I was, so of course I'll devour forward.

Thank you very much for your talent, and for sharing (:

Team Carlisle. Every time, all the time. :-)

This was very odd but beautiful story. I’m glad you wrote about mental health. Thank you

U, this doesn't really seem like rape here I mean she gave consent. She even mentions how she gave consent.

It seems like a young girl who had sex with a guy she didn't like too much and then regretted it after.

Why she acting all sad and traumatized like no one forced her or anything.

I wondered if that's what you were hinting at, but I'm still confused. James has interacted with other people. Like when he confronted Edward and Tanya for stealing Bella's table, or when the mean girls said Bella could give him head on the floor of the JC Pennys. Was Bella just yelling about how they took her table in the third person in my first example?

Aspects of your story remind me of "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson, a book I read over and over in high school.
I'm touched that your Edward sacrificed his social rep to be with Bella. That's so significant when you're at that age.

What?! I never even suspected!
Makes sense though some of Charlie’s reactions.
Thank you for sharing this.

Your writing makes me sad, author!

It's WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.

That’s it?! I thought that the ending would explain everything. I felt that everything was so disconnected...

I liked the story because this is probably one of the strangest ones that I have read, but I wish there was more to it!

Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Messy Bronze Hair

Chicken sh*t, Edward.