Team Carlisle. Every time, all the time. :-)

This was very odd but beautiful story. I’m glad you wrote about mental health. Thank you

U, this doesn't really seem like rape here I mean she gave consent. She even mentions how she gave consent.

It seems like a young girl who had sex with a guy she didn't like too much and then regretted it after.

Why she acting all sad and traumatized like no one forced her or anything.

I wondered if that's what you were hinting at, but I'm still confused. James has interacted with other people. Like when he confronted Edward and Tanya for stealing Bella's table, or when the mean girls said Bella could give him head on the floor of the JC Pennys. Was Bella just yelling about how they took her table in the third person in my first example?

Aspects of your story remind me of "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson, a book I read over and over in high school.
I'm touched that your Edward sacrificed his social rep to be with Bella. That's so significant when you're at that age.

What?! I never even suspected!
Makes sense though some of Charlie’s reactions.
Thank you for sharing this.

Your writing makes me sad, author!

It's WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.

That’s it?! I thought that the ending would explain everything. I felt that everything was so disconnected...

I liked the story because this is probably one of the strangest ones that I have read, but I wish there was more to it!

Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Messy Bronze Hair

Chicken sh*t, Edward.

Backbone, Bella backbone girl.

Come on Bella, stand up and be counted, defend yourself.

Wow, this is deep.

therapy? really?

this is boring as fuck

Any Edward that has been with tanya isn't one I want with bella. PERIOD.