Reviews for Fault
levityoflonging chapter 26 . 4/23
I wondered if that's what you were hinting at, but I'm still confused. James has interacted with other people. Like when he confronted Edward and Tanya for stealing Bella's table, or when the mean girls said Bella could give him head on the floor of the JC Pennys. Was Bella just yelling about how they took her table in the third person in my first example?
levityoflonging chapter 20 . 4/23
Aspects of your story remind me of "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson, a book I read over and over in high school.
I'm touched that your Edward sacrificed his social rep to be with Bella. That's so significant when you're at that age.
GeekMama Bee chapter 26 . 10/18/2020
What?! I never even suspected!
Makes sense though some of Charlie’s reactions.
Thank you for sharing this.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/27/2020
Your writing makes me sad, author!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/22/2020
It's WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.
Messy Bronze Hair chapter 31 . 6/26/2019
That’s it?! I thought that the ending would explain everything. I felt that everything was so disconnected...

I liked the story because this is probably one of the strangest ones that I have read, but I wish there was more to it!

Thank you for sharing!

Messy Bronze Hair
Pattsy1994 chapter 5 . 5/20/2019
Chicken sh*t, Edward.
Pattsy1994 chapter 3 . 5/19/2019
Backbone, Bella backbone girl.
Pattsy1994 chapter 2 . 5/19/2019
Come on Bella, stand up and be counted, defend yourself.
Pattsy1994 chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
Wow, this is deep.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/11/2019
therapy? really?

this is boring as fuck
Guest chapter 8 . 1/11/2019
Any Edward that has been with tanya isn't one I want with bella. PERIOD.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/11/2019
Why is bella all fucking traumatized? Ya what happened is shitty, an older guy took advantage but its not like she was a kid and its not like it was violent and some stranger. He was her boyfriend. Fucking get over it already.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/11/2019
A bella that lets Jessica Stanley pick on her? No thanks. Pussy
BellaTesoro chapter 31 . 12/3/2018
This ending didn't actually fit with the rest of the story in its gritty raw previous flow. But I'll tell you I did enjoy Edward and Bella's version of HEA. At least we know she is under a doctor's care and that she's not become the perfect little wife all of a sudden. I take it they married or perhaps just living together. Anyway, I don't know if you still read your reviews but I left my thoughts along the way to show you that your story was thought provoking. I know you may have heard it before but I'm amazed that at the young age you were when you wrote this that you could have come up with such insight into the mental state of a wounded girl...
Thank you for keeping this here so readers like myself could find and enjoy the story. I wonder if you have continued your writing...
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