Reviews for Chance Encounter
Smilelc chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
Loved IT!

Update SOOn! (:(:
aerobee82 chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
I definitely think you should keep writing this story. It's certainly complicated, but it's really good.

She better share her story with Edward sooner rather than later, because I get the impression he won't settle for *eventually*.
CutieNYC chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Very well written! Redundant I know...
CutieNYC chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I'm hoping that by now you already know how I feel about this story...anyway just going back to make sure that I have reviewed every chapter. I loved this chapter. The introduction of the main characters was just right. I was hooked from this chapter forward.
CutieNYC chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
"but the lack of reviews makes me wonder if this story is really worth my effort."

IT IS COMPLETELY WORTH THE EFFORT! I'm sorry for the caps but I just can't believe that you would even think such a thing. I absolutely adore this story and constantly check for updates. Your writing is stunningly beautiful. I wish that I could do something about the reviews but I can't. I have seen some really crappy stories on this site get hundreds of reviews while the really quality ones gets so little attention and I just can't explain it. Please know that I really appreciate you sharing your talent with us all and it would really suck if you were to stop.

Now on to the chapter...Alice and Bella's friendship brought tears to my eyes. This is one of the best protrayal of their friendship that I've ever read. Edward and Bella's two conversations were both spot on. It was beautifully done. Freaking Jacob Black! He was completely out of line! Why does that guy always have to start something ;p Yes...my Jacob hate tend to be a bit strong..
campcathryn chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
Love it
lindyrb chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
Great update! Yep...ball is in Bella's court. She HAS to talk to Edward, telling him everything about her past. No holding out. And it may be that the best way to do it is for her to talk to him first, then have Alice and/or Jasper also talk to him...help him understand some things if it's too tough for her to.

And Edward needs to start addressing how he's going to make adjustments to make things work, too. He needs to acknowledge how tough his lifestyle will be on their relationship.

Love this story!
kerry-b chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
Wow this story is amaizing 1 of the best ones i have ever read, cnt wait to see what happens between bella and edward in the future chapters.
kateconn chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
She definatley needs to open up a little more...Great story
xXx-SE-xXx chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
im really loving this story so far i cant wait for the next update! so please dont make me wait too long! xx
melferd chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
LIfe interrupts smooshy in luv time. If they think this is inturrupted, they should try to have meaningful conversations with kids around! LOLS!

Awesome, honest and great chapter, thanks for this.
DeArPrUdEnCe03 chapter 6 . 10/31/2009
Just found your story and I love it! Those two together are so cute and thank god for that kiss. I can't wait for the coming up chapters and how the relationship is going to grow. Update soon!
lindyrb chapter 6 . 10/30/2009
Perfect development! Love the steps, and that Edward is subtly trying to get Bella used to some public exposure and fans slowly and in less chaotic situations. I'm willing to bet there are some things in Bella's background that she needs to talk about to Edward...sounds like she has some family issues to confront!
jerseyhalliwell chapter 6 . 10/30/2009
i think their relationship is developing along perfectly :)

they started out as friends and grew closer the more time they spent together. they've even got a morning / domestic routine down pat!

if anything, taking it this slow is exactly what they need because jumping head first into a relationship from either of their perspectives is not an easy task.

thank you for this chapter! i love long chapters! :)
vohangilalao chapter 6 . 10/30/2009
oh i love it! i can't wait the next chapter!

aurélie
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