Reviews for Obsession take 2
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
This was great.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!
BernerMom chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Very sweet. I liked it.
MilkShaikh chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
3 :)
MaryVampy08 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Aww, so nice. :)
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Great job with this.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
aliasmel1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Don't mind me... Just passing through. You will find a lot of reviews from me as I go through all your story's :D

I love love love this one! Well done! Even if it was written years ago :)
Sic Vita Est chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This is much improved from the first versions (not to say that the first one was bad because it wasn't). I am glad that you fixed the over use of ! exclamation points, something that can be a tad bothersome. The story itself flows much better, so well done!
HJ chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Much better.