|Reviews for Vengeance|
| Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 2/10
| Martyr Mcjones chapter 1 . 11/9/2020
It's your destiny to finish this story!
| Martyr Mcjones chapter 4 . 11/9/2020
Pretty good story defiantly the most entertaining fic I've ever read, it would be better if it was finished.
| Alexsanderlay chapter 4 . 10/5/2020
when will you update, we've been waiting for quite a while
| Panda.k1ng chapter 3 . 9/3/2020
I laughed my head off at kensuke becoming brain dead. Say what you will, but his ignorance was beyond annoying
| Drake D Zero chapter 4 . 8/23/2020
It is a shame this was abandoned. I have been searching for an story in which Shinji doesn't get in the damn robot or gives a damn about NERV(including Rei or Misato.), this was the perfect fit.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/12/2020
This was one of the most intelligent things ive read
Shinji's so smart and powerful
I want to know how he would have stopped seele and NERV
How he was going to use his pilot status to change everything
What Rei was planning to do and how the confrontation with shinji would effect both of them
How Misato and Asuka would act as they see him as hypocrite because they are unaware of his goals
I want to know
I NEED to know
You truly are a monster for not finishing this
And I get how it can be hard to write for some on so damn cunning
But at this point I just want to see this finished
But I know it's to late
And thats the saddest thing for mw
| ardvarkeating101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
| sunny chapter 4 . 5/27/2020
i wish this was ongoing so bad! can i give my soul to the devil to revive this amazing fic?
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2020
Cold-hearted exterior would've been Shinji's canon exterior.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2020
Your Shinji's better than the original Shinji. This should've happened in canon.
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2020
Such a shame that this story has ended it's not even completed
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2020
Shinji is far too precise in his strikes. Calling Asuka a doll, for example, is unnatural. Why would he do that? He'd call her a tool, maybe.
Asuka is far to eager to doubt herself. True, she has self-esteem issues, but those only shine through once she is losing. She is intelligent as well, she lied to herself all her life, she wouldn't be swayed by words so easily. She got the highest synch score, everyone depends on her because she is the only pilot remaining. She's got everything she could want. "You dare question me? Because of you, the city was destroyed and humanity almost wiped out! You sit here in your cell, cowering in fear and being a bitter loser, whining about yourself! So what if I am not happy? Happiness is for children, and once the angels are gone, I will be a hero and you are nothing but a sniveling rat, forever known as the boy who refused to fight. You know nothing about me, Third, and you can not possibly understand me!"
| Kian Xki chapter 1 . 9/12/2019
there is more bravery in your Shinji than the original one
Not to say that fighting giant monsters doesn't need some bravery, but Shinji actually was someone who went with the flow
It actually is harder to stand social presure and give an argument than follow the croud in what you know to be a bad choise with worst consecuences, or really to stand up for your own belives when faced with oposition
As the only fiction with a Shinji who refused to pilot an EVA you get high marks in an unknow world
Great fiction, i have been searching for this for a while, a Shinji that would stand up againdt his father, that would use true bravery to denny NERV, to be an evangelion fiction rather than some AU universe where Gendo wasn't evil and Shinjin was a spoiled child
Seriously, you are the only one that i have found with the mensage [you can go to hell, i won't be your puppet to pilot your EVA]
Everyone else was a false oposition that would crumble with Rei and showed that they were unwilling to deviate from the plot, to make a stand and be proud
Everyone else takes a compromise with the Evil that is Gendo unaware that by doing so they have already lost
Even the power of superman wasted in someone who saw them as his shield and validation yet was afraid to fight true evil of Gendo
And the one with the silver tongue to outwit the devil by sending the profesional was a spoiled child whose name was also Shinji and whose doting father was also callled Gendo
So know that by this chapter alone, you are a favorite
| Vendetta419 chapter 4 . 6/23/2019
This story was amazing and I hope there is a sequel because I would loved to see Shinji plan carried out.