Reviews for Vengeance |
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69646561733532 chapter 4 . 10/4 “Courts and Committees decide what is right. We are here to ensure there is someone left to pass that judgement.” “Pilot for us, or die.” “You have 5 minutes to make your choice.” |
S Y M B O L O F F E A R chapter 1 . 7/12 But I suppose should be hypocritical and post my own words, but these are going to be most positive. Nerv would love these people saying "save teh humanity!" in the reviews as they would be piss easy to manipulate for their real motive and reason for existing, which is to start third impact on either Gendo, Yui, or Seele's terms. The killing of the angels are less slaying monsters to save the world and much more a step by step ritual to achieve godhood with humanity itself the final sacrificial lamb as it was never about saving the world with Nerv. So the world of evangelion is doomed regardless. That's just the facts as Shinji Misato, and the rest are just useful idiots to the real power players of evangelion. Tools to be used and discarded. Shinji's bravery is frankly wasted on Nerv as it only brought him pain and trauma with the so called mature adults bullshiting him to keep their most prized show horse from running away. Canon Shinji doesn't have a fucking chance as the game was rigged for the start for him as he never had any inkling of control of his life. Absolute tragic character and one of my favorite characters for that reason. And that's why I love this Shinji as he refuses to use or guilt tripped (because what Gendo did in the first episode of the original was blatant emotional manipulation and strongarming) and his rebellion against the order of things warms my heart. And the writing pulled me in when I a wee lad and was one of the biggest inspirations for me to write. Seeing Shinji butt heads with his would-be manipulators are cathartic as hell. And Shinji has a big point on inaction is the much better option than helping the plans of undeniably morally wonky folks, especially the folks who are paramilitary backed by the literal illuminati. Now I admit I thought the talking aspects slow the story down a bit, but the psychological aspects was good nonetheless! And I am saddened to see it go without a update for so long, but I wish the best for your future endeavors! |
S Y M B O L O F F E A R chapter 4 . 7/12 But I suppose should be hypocritical and post my own words, but these are going to be most positive. Nerv would love these people saying "save teh humanity!" in the reviews as they would be piss easy to manipulate for their real motive and reason for existing, which is to start third impact on either Gendo, Yui, or Seele's terms. The killing of the angels are less slaying monsters to save the world and much more a step by step ritual to achieve godhood with humanity itself the final sacrificial lamb as it was never about saving the world with Nerv. So the world of evangelion is doomed regardless. That's just the facts as Shinji Misato, and the rest are just useful idiots to the real power players of evangelion. Tools to be used and discarded. Shinji's bravery is frankly wasted on Nerv as it only brought him pain and trauma with the so called mature adults bullshiting him to keep their most prized show horse from running away. Canon Shinji doesn't have a fucking chance as the game was rigged for the start for him as he never had any inkling of control of his life. Absolute tragic character and one of my favorite characters for that reason. And that's why I love this Shinji as he refuses to use or guilt tripped (because what Gendo did in the first episode of the original was blatant emotional manipulation and strongarming) and his rebellion against the order of things warms my heart. And the writing pulled me in when I a wee lad and was one of the biggest inspirations for me to write. Seeing Shinji butt heads with his would-be manipulators are cathartic as hell. And Shinji has a big point on inaction is the much better option than helping the plans of undeniably morally wonky folks, especially the folks who are paramilitary backed by the literal illuminati. Now I admit I thought the talking aspects slow the story down a bit, but the psychological aspects was good nonetheless! And I am saddened to see it go without a update for so long, but I wish the best for your future endeavors! |
S Y M B O L O F F E A R chapter 4 . 7/11 damn lol, People are really giving a scathing reviews to a obviously dead fic and to a obviously moved on author lol |
GainaxVel3o chapter 4 . 5/12 The story is interesting I'll admit, but this is NOT a Shinji who is a normal person. This is a Shinji who is a conniving supervillain that happens to be our protagonist. It would be cooler if the story didn't go on and on about his bravery or how he's subverting the will of others. No, he's just a selfish asshole and I wanted someone, ANYONE, to beat the crap out of this guy. The original Shinji Ikari was brave. This Shinji is a nihilist trying to justify his own pathetic cowardice. |
TNO chapter 4 . 4/27 I doubt that anyone will read it, but it was a really good fic. |
TNO chapter 3 . 4/25 Talk with Kozo was underwhelming to be frank. Ritsuko would be much more interesting. Rei part had a great potential (how you can break somebody who has nothing?) unfortunately it was very short. Kensuke brain damage was a very cheap shot, nothing like that ever happened in the canon. |
TNO chapter 2 . 4/25 Nice to somebody finally tell Asuka that she is NERV's doll as much as Rei. But in the canon, there were perfectly logical explanations why other Evas couldn't be used. Eva-00 had no usable pilot, and Eva-02 was incomplete. |
TNO chapter 1 . 4/25 One "Not acting" is as much choice as taking an action, and as much impactful. Two When the world ends he will be killed with it, not given a nice seat on the beach to observe. Three You do not care about some abstract humanity? Fine, most people do not give a damn about that. You do not care about people around, including the girl being sent on a suicide mission? Well, this makes you an asshole, but ok. You do not care about you dying with everybody else? Then you are a total nihilist, and you have no right to go high and mighty about morality/empathy like Shinji did here |
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 3 . 12/18/2023 Dude, you killed Kensuke's mind! Will he ever recover?! |
Jaydog123 chapter 4 . 5/29/2023 This is amazing it’s so different and unique I really hope you update this agian one day! |
AlmiBoiiXD chapter 1 . 1/12/2023 Ahhh i love this ! This is one of the most greatest Evangelion fanfiction i ever seen ! It's great to see my boi Shinji became a very sharp yet dangerous man , even surpass his father ( not his father anymore probably ) i still like the original Shinji tho , if there any chance you will update this ? Cuz i'm curious about Shinji and Rei relationship in this , will Shinji be able to find Rei's weakness ? Also , i'd like to see his relationship with Kaworu too ! :33 |
Petrus streamrock chapter 4 . 9/26/2022 Dude... DUDE! I can't believe I've just found this fict now! And I regretted that I read it all in one fell swoop! PLEASE PLEASE PLASEEEE! FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING THAT IS HOLLY! CONTINUE THIS FICT! This is literally the only fict where Shinji is portrayed as a man who stood for himself without it feeling like a shameless self insert/wish fulfillment of the writers! And I absolutely love and agree with your take on Yui Ikari. Too many people portrayed her as some sort good, loving, kind mother figure while it could only be far froom the truth. Oh look at me, Im Yui! I love my son! What do I do? Built a giant war cyborg so that my son could be forced to pilot it and get send into a war that could potentially horrendously kills him! Mother of the year right there. This, is not a fict where Shinji got turned into badass garrystu. This is a fict where Shinji is given COMMON SENSE. And adding common sense into the cast of Evangelion, turns out can make such a great story! |
Vollmilch chapter 3 . 5/5/2022 I need an update |
Vollmilch chapter 4 . 5/2/2022 This fanfiction is sooo cathartic. Love it! |