Reviews for Delusional
Miranda Kliese chapter 17 . 6/11/2010


she thinks she hates him, doesn't she?

tell me she does!

or i'm gonna cry!

nah...not to that point...

but it'll be something i would like hearing...


read you soon!


FaerieDemon chapter 16 . 6/9/2010
Mean cliffy! I luv your story but I think Sky might be a tad Mary-Sue, though she does pwn XD She's not as bad as most OC's. Thanks for writing~ and devil's pure... me wants to know what that is -_-
elrond-76 chapter 15 . 5/24/2010
I have to read again the whole story to be able to understand it, but still, I like the chapter.

I hope you will update soon.
FaerieDemon chapter 15 . 5/23/2010
wow... this just gets better... I still have no idea what's going on half the time and so many questions but I cannot wait until they're resolved XD Sky is a little... off, ne? Thanks for the update.
Miranda Kliese chapter 15 . 5/23/2010
don't worry for taking to much time...exams really suck!...well about the chap...

OMG!...and Wisely appears...


sky is a little girl? O.o


OMG!... you've made up my weekend!


i'm so hyper by the moment...u.u you later!...or sooner!



Miranda Kliese chapter 14 . 3/7/2010
WI!...(sparkles in Miranda's eyes!)

i loved this fic!...i was waiting until i couldn't wait any more!...i said to myself that i should began to read it now, and so i did...

this fic is really good!...

i began at 21.00 and now its took me a while, but i made it...D...

i will be waiting for the next chap!...


LUnar.x.NiGHT.x.sKy chapter 14 . 3/7/2010
SORASOYA chapter 14 . 3/5/2010
o.o Allen fell from that height? And he's still alive? *dies*

Wao~ Epic ending, nii-san... XD

Zange, huh... Isn't there the place Sky was in the previous chapter? Hm... Interesting.
MagixSxientixt24 chapter 14 . 3/5/2010
Very nice story. Was really into it and finished it all in 2 days. Very nice! I love how you used Pures. Very nice imagination. Update soon! :D
FaerieDemon chapter 14 . 3/4/2010
LOLZ, Epic ending... I was kinda sad that Ledah had to go into sword form... but it's better than having a Lenalee clone following him around _"

Keep it up and keep updating~
SORASOYA chapter 13 . 2/27/2010
EH. AWESOME-ness. Krory has awesome roles in your AUs, nii-san. OO The Earl has the second strongest Pure? *dies*

I wonder what's happening to Sky...
FaerieDemon chapter 13 . 2/25/2010
Awesomeness. [was going to review individual chapters but decided that would be annoying] Not much else to say except... wow. You're an awesome writer. I can't wait for an update.
SORASOYA chapter 12 . 2/10/2010
Nice! XD Hm, who is this archangel? I wonder.. With that, the story definitely uhh.. Had a thicker plot 8D

But... Why does this story remind me of Devil Survivor, somehow? (shot)
SORASOYA chapter 11 . 2/9/2010
Actually, I didn't really get the chapter.. (most probably because I skimmed through it; Didn't have time) Yeah, but even so, I feel that Delusional is much more interesting than FoS, currently.

Ledah, she seems that she'll be a tool for future AllenxLenalee.. And, nice name 8D
elrond-76 chapter 11 . 2/9/2010
I'm afraid that I haven't completly understand this chapter, but what I have understand seem to be very interresting.

As always, you write very well.

I wonder if Ledah is the hint that you will put more of AllenXLenalee.

Sorry for my english and if you want help for your french translation of this fic, ask me, I will help you the more I can.
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