|Reviews for The Last Fourth, a Portrait in November|
| thatgirljazz chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
I have tears in my eyes! This was so sad. Lovely work.
| misswhiteblack chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
I really liked this one.
I like the way you kept repeating it.
Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs.
It makes me want to sob.
Well done to you.
| chipzixo chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
hello there lupinlover.
I've just read through all your stories, but this one has to be my favourite! it made me sad. but that's a good thing!
well done my friend :)
| JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was so sad, but very well done. I like how you went through different instances that the names were used. I thought it was really cool the way you put their four names throughout it with the explanation on it before.
The end with Lupin standing outside of the house after James and Lily died was just completely well done, you could feel the loneliness. Imagine being Lupin and realizing that about the group that has so much been a group and is not anymore.
Great job. I really loved this.
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Gorgeous. You have a real talent with words, and anyone who writes a good remus Lupin is a good thing in my books!
| rara999 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
We liked this. This is exactly what a short story is supposed to be - all about the moment.
Just as a pointer though - Lupin is British and so wouldn't refer to the 'sidewalk'. He'd talk about a 'pavement'.
| ShakNali chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Aw, sad and sweet. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.