Reviews for The Elemental Heroes
BlueYusei chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Your story is good but there is a thing you need to sort out:
You need to make some paragraphs so it would be easier to read; it would be better if you put some line breaks if a different scene is coming up. But overall, nice story and the element marks remind me of the signer marks in Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds.
N3rmAk37 chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
This is a great story but there are some things you need to improve. I dont mean the plot because thats just perfect. Some things you need to do are like seperating the different charcter dialogues into different paragraphs so the readers dont get confused. Also you should try to be a little more discriptive and try not to repeat the same words over and over use synonyms. So like i said I love the story and I would really appriciate it if you took at leats a little of my advice.